Take Me

to wind swept melodies, fingerprints in the sky . . color my world with pastel moments slowly scribbling outside the lines, make love to me on marshmallow clouds, while softly kissing my lips of pink in poetic whispers please take me there _______ * something sensual, playful and romantic *

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Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2022 6:30:00 PM

I can feel the ecstasy as you float on cloud nine, Wonderful write Brandy...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/4/2022 6:39:00 PM

Oh, my ! Thank you, Joseph. You are right about this feeling. Floating I am. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

Nature Boy

Date: 11/2/2018 12:39:00 PM

I so enjoyed your imaginative words and the way they blend so well together and the use of “making love” that heightens the sensual vision.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/2/2018 1:27:00 PM

:) Thank you Nature Boy. Imagining making love on clouds of white, while drifting in a tender sky- such a breathtaking thought indeed. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/10/2018 12:34:00 PM

Things could get a little bouncy on those marshmallow clouds :) TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 6:54:00 PM

Yes, things could a little bouncy- sticky too, on these marshmallow clouds. ;) Thank you Tobey for your wonderful words. ~ Brandy

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/3/2018 2:08:00 PM

Fantasy in your words marshmallow clouds await.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2018 4:24:00 PM

Thank you Ralph. :) Yes, those clouds await me, in this sweet fantasy. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/3/2018 9:48:00 AM

Back on the beat again Brandy...lovely and romantically mystifying...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2018 11:34:00 AM

:) Yes, I am. Thank you Winged Warrior for your kind words. They are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 9/2/2018 10:34:00 PM

Purely pleasurable and romantic

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/3/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Tim. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2018 8:07:00 AM

Excellent..beautiful poetry, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. :) I appreciate your lovely comment. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2018 9:21:00 PM

I think all poets can relate to how poetry affects our spirits Brandy. A lovely creation! : )

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/31/2018 10:21:00 PM

:) Thank you Connie. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Poetry does give us wings. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/31/2018 8:33:00 PM

Beautiful,romantic, sensual poetry, Brandy, these beautiful pastel images scribbled outside the lines will linger with me. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/31/2018 9:17:00 PM

Thank you John. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. I enjoyed creating this playful little scribble. Poetry are words in motion!! ~ Brandy