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Take a Pill

I suppose there's a pill to fix all this the clash of sentiments the war in my head if I didn't speak waves wouldn't spread if I didn't think through life I could tread though I suppose too he'd then like me less for he appreciates me despite all my mess

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Date: 3/4/2017 11:20:00 PM
A 7 for your description of us all--fallible but wonderful. Janice
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/5/2017 11:25:00 AM
Honoured! So pleased that you enjoyed it so, and connected to it too, making me feel that much moe human ;) Ty Janice xomo!
Date: 3/2/2017 7:54:00 PM
I love the simplicity and honesty of this fine poem, Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2017 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 3/1/2017 11:47:00 PM
I especially like: "If I didn't speak waves wouldn't spread. There are some waves spreading here in this poem. John
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2017 5:00:00 PM
;) Ty John!
Date: 3/1/2017 8:17:00 PM
This is awesome, Maureen, I like the words chosen to describe cognizance.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/1/2017 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Brendan ;) xomo!
Date: 3/1/2017 5:00:00 PM
This was fantastic Maureen. Something about it captured and held my attention. I like everything about it.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/1/2017 11:04:00 PM
Thank you Chris. Sharing my inescapable self, I am honoured that you liked it so.
Date: 3/1/2017 4:28:00 PM
I love this Maureen--most of us can relate--right ?? ~~ Jeanie ~~
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/1/2017 10:53:00 PM
...sadly so ;) Ty Jeanie! xomo

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