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Take a Deeper Dive

Look and laugh, Rip them in half, Break them down. Agony tastes good, It's all misunderstood, Do it all again. Texting to rant, Listen to them pant, A spreading frown. Tease and taunt, Chuckle and haunt, No privacy then. Speak to accuse, Friend to abuse, Quiet war, but real. Silence grows, Nobody arose, Nothing to concern. Push and disagree, A deep, dark sea, No time to heal. Will it ever stop? Who's at the top? What is earned? End bullying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/28/2023 8:14:00 AM
Dear Writing Muse, your poetic pen is deep and rich with anguished expression. I adore the piece and title. A deep and thought-provoking dive, indeed. Your last line, "End bullying", punctuates the piece with a firm and potent finale. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/28/2023 4:42:00 PM
I’m so sorry to know you’ve been a victim of bullying. I agree that bullying is a big problem. Always believe in yourself first :)
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Writing Muse
Date: 12/28/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Susan the compliments really mean lots! Bullying is a big problem, and one I've experienced twice, so I'm glad you have seen this poem. Have a very happy new year too!

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