Aiyah Torres Poet Blank verse

Take a Bite

Come on people let's take a bite.
Then be the apple of an eye.
When it updates ,world so screwed.
How an Apple rules the world.

I had a bite one day it came.
An Apple tablet in my hands.
It made me rich and famous.
It left my pocket so abused.

Over a train or in a cab,
You see someone keeps in touch.
Busy roads and dizzy mind,
When will I buy the latest one.

It is somehow aggravating,
To live each day in so much pain.
I trade my old car just to have you,
Then by tomorrow it's no longer new.

iPhone ,iPod ,iPad ,Mac and watch.
Each day I need to work so hard.
To take a bite and have it all.
Then left so gorgeous in empty room.



Aiyah De Torres

28 May 2015

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Eric Boddie August 5, 2015 at 10:19 AM wow aiyah, i didn't see that coming....and i must admit it was mind numbing.....with so much technology that's out today....laziness, obesity, and so much more because it refuses to let the kids play.....

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 2:51 PM Aiyah, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT

Viv Wigley July 19, 2015 at 1:12 AM Congratulations, Aiyah, well done. Viv x

Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 9:17 PM Congratulations on your win Aiyah.

Tim Smith July 18, 2015 at 5:28 PM Congrats Aiyah !!

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 1:58 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola June 24, 2015 at 11:09 AM Very deep and insightful :), jill

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2015 at 3:48 PM this one is quite philosophical in mature! I enjoyed it.

Constance La France June 14, 2015 at 3:41 PM Aiyah, great write, Well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2015 at 1:45 PM - I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend, dear Aiyah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2015 at 11:47 PM really cool piece, aya... one of your best!... shine on!.. huggs

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 6:29 PM I love it...SK Aiyah Torres May 27, 2015 at 8:22 PM thanks Skat ! :O)

Kp Nunez May 27, 2015 at 6:04 PM Haha...ang kulet! It can't be helped...smartphones, etc., do make our lives a little bit easier, right? Just make sure the usage is kept to certain reasonable degree. Let the Joneses have what they want, I keep what I need. Love this write, kabayan! 7. Hugsies! Aiyah Torres May 27, 2015 at 8:22 PM Thanks Kim :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2015 at 2:50 PM - The technology's power - Everyone must have a new tomorrow !!!! - (But, not me .... I do not like the newest and unknown) - A great poem,dear Aiyah - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres May 27, 2015 at 8:22 PM thanks Anne for your kind visit and words ^_^

Jan Allison May 27, 2015 at 2:35 PM I hope I never take a bite of 'Apple' Aiyah - i have a simple phone to text and call - i am after all a self confessed technological dinosaur lol - great write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx Aiyah Torres May 27, 2015 at 2:38 PM haha... I don't have one as well ,Jan :O) "d rather live in jurassic time ^_^ thanks for a kind visit :O)