Take a Bite

Come on people let's take a bite.
Then be the apple of an eye.
When it updates ,world so screwed.
How an Apple rules the world.

I had a bite one day it came.
An Apple tablet in my hands.
It made me rich and famous.
It left my pocket so abused.

Over a train or in a cab,
You see someone keeps in touch.
Busy roads and dizzy mind,
When will I buy the latest one.

It is somehow aggravating,
To live each day in so much pain.
I trade my old car just to have you,
Then by tomorrow it's no longer new.

iPhone ,iPod ,iPad ,Mac and watch.
Each day I need to work so hard.
To take a bite and have it all.
Then left so gorgeous in empty room.



Aiyah De Torres

28 May 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/5/2015 10:19:00 AM
wow aiyah, i didn't see that coming....and i must admit it was mind numbing.....with so much technology that's out today....laziness, obesity, and so much more because it refuses to let the kids play.....
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Date: 7/19/2015 2:51:00 PM
Aiyah, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Aiyah, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/18/2015 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Aiyah.
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Date: 7/18/2015 5:28:00 PM
Congrats Aiyah !!
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Date: 7/18/2015 1:58:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/24/2015 11:09:00 AM
Very deep and insightful :), jill
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Date: 6/15/2015 3:48:00 PM
this one is quite philosophical in mature! I enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:41:00 PM
Aiyah, great write, Well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:45:00 PM
- I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend, dear Aiyah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2015 11:47:00 PM
really cool piece, aya... one of your best!... shine on!.. huggs
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Date: 5/27/2015 6:29:00 PM
I love it...SK
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM
thanks Skat ! :O)
Date: 5/27/2015 6:04:00 PM
Haha...ang kulet! It can't be helped...smartphones, etc., do make our lives a little bit easier, right? Just make sure the usage is kept to certain reasonable degree. Let the Joneses have what they want, I keep what I need. Love this write, kabayan! 7. Hugsies!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Kim :O))
Date: 5/27/2015 2:50:00 PM
- The technology's power - Everyone must have a new tomorrow !!!! - (But, not me .... I do not like the newest and unknown) - A great poem,dear Aiyah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM
thanks Anne for your kind visit and words ^_^
Date: 5/27/2015 2:35:00 PM
I hope I never take a bite of 'Apple' Aiyah - i have a simple phone to text and call - i am after all a self confessed technological dinosaur lol - great write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 2:38:00 PM
haha... I don't have one as well ,Jan :O) "d rather live in jurassic time ^_^ thanks for a kind visit :O)
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