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Tainted Dinner

The meal seemed amazing Apple pie hot out of the oven was blazing Ice cream with caramel sauce made it very pleasing Now one more toast we are raising The night become hair-raising Eating something tainted Do I get out of bed~I fainted Date Written: 11/7/2021 5 Place Note: Acrostic Rhyme 1. tainted ''T'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 12/22/2021 6:17:00 PM

Paula, I can see why you won. I think you might be speaking of my cooking. Tee Hee

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2021 8:44:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun "Tainted Dinner" write. It was just a write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France

Date: 11/11/2021 10:11:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my "T" Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2021 7:53:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win on your fun "T" Contest. Your contests are always fun and make me think. (Thank You) Glad you like this "Tainted Dinner" write. Have a blessed day.................

Eve Roper

Date: 11/10/2021 6:17:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win. I hope you didn't get sick.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/12/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun write. I didn't get sick, it was just a write. Have a blessed day.................

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/7/2021 7:42:00 PM

This is very clever and creative, Paula. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:40:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Glad you thought this one is very clever and creative. it was fun to write. Have a blessed day.................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:32:00 PM

Quite a twist…the toast gave more than you were looking for.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:34:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my twist to this one. Yes, the toast gave much more than we thought. Have a blessed day.................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/7/2021 4:17:00 PM

This made me hungry until I read something was tainted. Nice twist at the end...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:31:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my twist . Hungry, let's eat. Have a blessed day.................

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/7/2021 3:00:00 PM

My biggest fear you have portrayed so well in your Acrostic Paula. I say well done as my hair is now raised!! Good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/8/2021 7:29:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Oh no, your hair is now raised? I did not mean to do that. Have a blessed day.................