Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Tainted Dinner

The meal seemed amazing
Apple pie hot out of the oven was blazing
Ice cream with caramel sauce made it very pleasing
Now one more toast we are raising
The night become hair-raising
Eating something tainted
Do I get out of bed~I fainted

 

Date Written: 11/7/2021

5 Place  

Note: Acrostic Rhyme

1. tainted                                                                                                       
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      ''T'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest                                                                                                                                                                                  Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Marikate Kingston December 22, 2021 at 6:17 PM Paula, I can see why you won. I think you might be speaking of my cooking. Tee Hee Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2021 at 8:44 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun "Tainted Dinner" write. It was just a write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France November 11, 2021 at 10:11 AM Paula, congratulations on your win in my "T" Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Paula Goldsmith November 12, 2021 at 7:53 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win on your fun "T" Contest. Your contests are always fun and make me think. (Thank You) Glad you like this "Tainted Dinner" write. Have a blessed day.................

Eve Roper November 10, 2021 at 6:17 PM Paula, congratulations on your win. I hope you didn't get sick. Paula Goldsmith November 12, 2021 at 7:49 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun write. I didn't get sick, it was just a write. Have a blessed day.................

Laura Leiser November 7, 2021 at 7:42 PM This is very clever and creative, Paula. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :) Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:40 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Glad you thought this one is very clever and creative. it was fun to write. Have a blessed day.................

Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2021 at 6:32 PM Quite a twist…the toast gave more than you were looking for. Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my twist to this one. Yes, the toast gave much more than we thought. Have a blessed day.................

Delice Arleen Skelly November 7, 2021 at 4:17 PM This made me hungry until I read something was tainted. Nice twist at the end...Delice Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:31 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like my twist . Hungry, let's eat. Have a blessed day.................

Mike Gentile November 7, 2021 at 3:00 PM My biggest fear you have portrayed so well in your Acrostic Paula. I say well done as my hair is now raised!! Good luck in the contest! Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2021 at 7:29 AM Thank You, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Oh no, your hair is now raised? I did not mean to do that. Have a blessed day.................