Symphony's Synchrony

One violin weeps another cries Strings saw the air the music flies

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/26/2022 9:05:00 PM

they weep and we get happiness in soul!~

Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2022 2:59:00 PM

Not familiar with the form, but nenjoyed the succinct words. Bill

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/16/2022 1:46:00 PM

this is wonderful, gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2022 7:04:00 PM

Thanks for the enthusaism on this one, Ilene! :) gw

John Lawless

Date: 11/16/2022 4:58:00 AM

WOW.....all I can say is ....WOW. I shall have to show tis to a friend we call "Johnny Violin" as he played professionally .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2022 7:04:00 PM

'Johnny Violin' probably played in the same band as Sam Giancana, aka 'the Cello.' lol.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/15/2022 8:23:00 PM

So much fun in brevity! Lots of emotion here!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/15/2022 9:04:00 PM

Thank you for the enthusiasm for this one, Kim -- and thank you for all the encouragement you have given me over the years here. Really, truly appreciated. With gratitude, Gershon