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Moonlight or Sunrise Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress
08/18/2024

       

Dawn dissolves the shadowy face of Night, diluting its image before my eyes. And painting the horizon with Her light; Dawn's reddish glow adds a blush to the skies. Sol rises like a shiny gold doubloon out of a sea of crimson and scarlet. And intimidates a filagree Moon that fades with the skies, no longer starlit. Tweeting their symphony of the sunrise; songbirds welcome the first rays of the Sun. And from within my heart, I do likewise for the start of the day that's just begun. Nature's in tune with the strings of my soul, plucking the chords that leave me feeling whole.

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Date: 9/5/2024 6:31:00 AM
Dear emile a delightful write as always this is! Your way with words never fail to leavr me in awe! I love the line “Sol rises like a shiny gold doubloon out of a sea of crimson and scarlet. And intimidates a filagree Moon that fades with the skies, no longer starlit.” Unique and creative stanza! Well done! Always a pleasure reading you! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for sharing
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/5/2024 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, Ink Empress; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/19/2024 12:17:00 AM
This is beautiful poetess! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 8/19/2024 6:46:00 AM
Thanks, Karen; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 8/18/2024 12:45:00 PM
your imagery is delightful Emile, I especially love Sol being likened to a gold doubloon:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/18/2024 1:50:00 PM
Thanks, Jan; it's always a delight to hear from you, my friend. Emile.

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