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Symphony of Breath

Our composing begins when your lips envelope mine and the extent of your breath trails down my spine. In the shadows of night where whispers nibble, through winded thoughts our kisses scribble. Your air lifts me as high as a zephyr glides, with a symphony of touch like trombone slides. The beats of our hearts pulsate like drums beneath an audience of stars with echoed twinkling strums. Nov 3, 2019 Introduction by collaboration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One

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Date: 11/16/2019 12:50:00 PM
Very beautiful write, congrats to you both!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you John.... hugs :)
Date: 11/14/2019 10:17:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration. Congrats to you both on your top win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2019 2:06:00 PM
thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 11/14/2019 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations Sandy I enjoyed this so much! To both of you wonderful job!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Juliet is a wonderful writer :)
Date: 11/14/2019 2:15:00 PM
Congrats to both of you on your fine win in this contest. Bravo!!!!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend :) hugs
Date: 11/14/2019 2:13:00 PM
Damn, how sensual and romantic... we all need a lover like this... You and Juliet wrote a Romeo eque poem.... thanks for taking part..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/14/2019 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra for this experience, and thank you, Silent One for inspiring it!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/14/2019 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend for hosting this and encouraging me to find someone to write with. She writes beautifully and the topic was her idea :) hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 9:03:00 AM
Beautifully done. A wonderful melodic collaboration. I love the musical references in this stunning piece. Bravo to both poets. Best wishes in the contest
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend, Juliet was fun to write with, she is a great writer... hugs :)
Date: 11/4/2019 6:52:00 AM
Great collaboration Sandy and Juliet...beautifully done!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay, it was fun.... hugs
Date: 11/4/2019 4:57:00 AM
- A great co-write, Sandra & Juliet :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise...it was a fun write :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 10:00:00 PM
Love the title of this collaboration ~ a beautifully sensuous symphony!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/4/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...Juliet was fun to write with... hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. It was my pleasure to collaborate with you. Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/3/2019 8:45:00 PM
Thank you for accepting....you write beautifully and it was a pleasure writing with you....i am sure there will be a next time :) hugs
Date: 11/3/2019 8:40:00 PM
A collaboration with Juliet Ligon :)
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