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Sylvia's Flower Garden

Musky fragrance inundates
my nostrils as I enter 
the garden center:
a rhapsodic feeling
in idyllic surroundings.
The air is humid
like an Amazon garden,
heat barely tolerable
making my glasses misty.
Soft music, dulcet and sweet,
swamp the amazing conservatory. The caterpillar had shed off its chrysalis, 
and a perfect swallowtail butterfly appears.
It fluttered here and there
tasting the marvelous flowers around.
My cup of felicity abounds.
 
All around a miscellany of colors
enticing the radiant buyer with anything
that catches his fancy,	
and I, mad about plants,
run in frenzy 
from pot to pot,
stand to stand,
plot to plot,
inflame my smell nerves
with sweet sapphire orchids,
enchant my eyes with
white bearded irises,
become delirious with 
a blood red amaryllis,
inhale the fragrance
of a white gardenia,
or lose my mind 
on a black eyed Susan.
Which exotic plant must I choose?
It would be my talisman for my home
 
What shall I buy?
A red pyramid astilbe,  
multi-coloured plethora of petunias or
scented forget-me-nots?
Or better still a dwarf 
Deep red rose?

I feel my empty pockets,
I let out an ephemeral sigh,
and go back home, 
empty handed alas.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 2:21 PM
I could feel, hear, see and smell the garden. There are so many plants that can be propagated with just a cutting so don't let not having the money keep you from enjoying plants of all kinds. I enjoyed reading this one today. I don't know how I missed it. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 10:37 AM
You brought me there Victor, lovely imagery, well done!
Roper Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 10:54 PM
love the story, Victor, with scents and imagery, and the ending , always empty pockets.
Buehler Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Sylvia's garden is a place I'd love to be, Victor! Your poem is so pleasantly vivid, with a variety of colors, sights and scents. A marvelous creation! :D
Ball Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:57 AM
What a wonderful piece this is. Makes me think of my visits to the garden center where there are so many things I want but don't have room for. My choice in your case would be the dwarf rose for your kitchen window or a table by a window where it could catch the light. Love this. God Bless, JB
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 10:04 PM
I love this line that sums your visit up so concisely. "My cup of felicity abounds." Orchids would be my choice. They come in so many colors and my husband excelled at growing them. This flower garden sounds divine Victor. Have a great weekend! Blessings xxoo
Ashley Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Ah, Victor, poetry pulses from your heart and soul and onto the wanting page through your gifted pen. Your expressive verse took me with you to this enchanting garden center (there is one a few towns over that has the same effect on me!). I was enticed, I was enthralled ("delirious/amaryllis", "lose my mind on a black eyed Susan") my imagination rejoiced! In the splendid end, my elation was brought down to Earth in commiseration with your sigh. A soulful ending to a superb piece, and a feeling that I've left the garden center with too.. A fav! I bask in the shine of your brilliant pen, dear poet. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
May Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:52 AM
You are sold on a garden filled with fragrance and beauty, Very nicely penned Victor..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:22 AM
You take such joy in your walkabouts. Oh the pleasure of sights and scents, the sadness of returning without one goodie. For now I have a couple lovely sprays from the funeral, uplifting though the circumstance. My granddaughters filled with sunflowers - beautiful. Blessings to you, Victor.
Seeker Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 6:12 AM
the elixirous fragrance of Silvia’s garden suffuses each pore of our being!
Y. Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:55 AM
WoW! Victor The garden was beautiful, and it had lovely colors. I didn't expect the ending.Have a wonderful day-Alexis
Allison Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:55 AM
we super imagery Victor but aww the ending was sad and unexpected... but you can always visit again:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Lovely and enchanting... a dreamy breath of joy. I love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Edmonds  Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:04 AM
A lovely visit to Silvia’s flower garden reading this beautiful poem Victor, most enjoyable... Belle
Pandit Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 4:32 AM
A garden with all its colors and fragrance---your descriptions so apt, Victor and in your signature style your poem takes a turn in the end.
Cunningham Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:53 AM
Love the smells of a garden center all the different scents of flowers, so much choice. My heart would sink too if I felt my pockets empty after spending ages picking the right one. Tom
Poet Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:47 AM
You penned a great Art Tableau, Victor, with a lot of hope and faith, but unfortunately the ending was so sad, that’s how great talented poets let the waves of their emotions flow through time and space. Very best regards dear friend
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 1:30 AM
You describe beauty in such creative ways and then comes the sad ending.. great artwork, Victor, it's brilliant:)
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