Swinging Stars

Good Morning Hiya. Hi. Format aside this entry is very poetic in word choices theme voice and tone. It is one that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. I found this to read and hear in the most vintage and truest poetic fashion. Thank you for sharing your poetic skill. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace Blessings and Light always. (smile) PS your title is magnificent and never did you stray...

Aloha, Hiya. The use of idyllic words that are interspersed throughout your Tetractys form, highlights the natural essence of your conveyance. They are truly pleasant, 'mauve moon without trails' and 'past, stained with pearl-pastels of present', nicely done. Aloha, William

This is a lovely poem and you did this form so well.. nice imagery and use of words.. You perfected this one.. you are a very talented poet.. always remember to be unique and as you progress as a poet, you will see what adjectives to use and how many to use.. always remember not to over do it... well done Hiya..

Beautiful poem! I loved the last line.

What are they? Oh a Tertrectys.

Wonderful Tertractys, dear Hiya. The sensations that arouse within are so strong and passionate that the heart beats in perfect sync with the depth of your feelings, bringing forth a stream of gifts that overflow from within.Blessings

I felt carried along on a delicate breeze as I read this piece. The essence of your words like a fragrance remembered.

Such a beautifully, expressive poem dear Hiya. So deep and profound. Exquisite penning as always from your glowing, talented pen. Loved it! Hugs and smiles to you :):)

Hiya, you are indeed so gifted at a young age. I am sure you will reach the acme of poetic success in no time. There is so much depth in your poems . This poem stands apart in the choice of words to express a single thought. "Past leaves umpteen memories in us. memories are just fluorescent leaves that sing in lifeline-ink of the past".... ! Such beautiful lines, Hiya. Into my FAVE.

"Perhaps, memories are just fluorescent leaves that sing in lifeline-ink" -- Absolutely! Whatever we see and hear outside of us, is the reflection of humanity's inner most soul. Blessings.

Thanks for sharing this creative one with us. Yes, those stars don't need mankind because God (Jesus) put them in motion. I like the design that the form you used gave the work. Sara

Great emotions that make the heart beat in unison with your sentiments. Blessings

I love short and beautiful poems. This is one!

pastels of present seconds, pulsating heartbeats without 'You and I--I like how linked the past and present in stellar images. Aptly emotive, nicely delivered, Hiya.

"pulsating heartbeats without 'You and I'" such a creative line! I loved reading this :-)

This is a dream, a starlit promise, a reflection of the heart's soft hold on light and gentleness and hope. I just love this so. God bless you. Love, Gina

I got on your page to comment and i smiled as i saw the trophy lol, ok now back to this poem! Where do i start, i love this form tetractys, one of those forms easiest to do for me. I love every word woven here in such eloquence. The way your words flow in such a poignant manner expressing so ink of your lifeline, memories that keep haunting you, as you are left “ without them” and funny, as i read this i am listening to “ with or without you “ by U2! Listen to it little angel! You might like.