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Swimming Lessons

My words swill and swirl and pool in my mouth. I wouldn't recommend swimming lessons. There's a shark in the water and I seem incapable of spitting it out.

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Date: 7/24/2024 2:18:00 AM
A good description. Well done.
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/25/2024 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Daisy :)
Date: 7/12/2024 6:41:00 AM
Wordless. These pools can be deep and frustrating.
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Date: 7/11/2024 7:17:00 AM
Dear Kate, How well expressed in so few words showing the fear without using the word. I very much enjoyed reading this wonderful poem! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/12/2024 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Daniel :)

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