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Swim or sink, dear pilgrim; feel free to choose Wary of despair when we have the blues Hold steady courage, surfing on the brink Optimistic view, colour of our ink Succumbing not to ego spawned ruse All around life vibrates, offering clues Stillness imbibes bliss, so what’s our excuse Soma nectar flowing; plunge in and drink Swim or sink Know God’s breath alone, powers our sinews Surrender allows bliss to form suffuse Delusional ego our only chink Vaporise mind, forging with God a link Discarding here and now, erst narrow views Swim or sink 22-September-2021

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Date: 9/22/2021 1:23:00 AM
Still he can save themselves if the push to the side. God helps us from flooding though.
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