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Sweetness

pink apples from trees swinging low in summer breeze offer eye a passing tease ~sweetness out of sight released with a single bite~ written 24/10/21 Tanka 5-7-7-5-7 syllables Thanksgiving poetry contest Milton Hankins sponsored

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Date: 10/24/2021 2:33:00 PM
My mouth is watering Krish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2021 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Mystic!! The temptation never dies!!
Date: 10/24/2021 2:32:00 PM
what a delightful tanka Krish:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/25/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan! tree full of apples and God to thank for!!

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