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Sweetest Surrender

Rapture! Our rhythmic bodies torrid together. Quenching thirst. Together once again sweetest surrender.. Euphoria! Susan Ashley July 15, 2017 *this poem was written as a Septolet but I don't see that as a choice under poetry forms so I classified it as a free verse*

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John Watt

Date: 3/15/2020 12:08:00 AM

Susan, a lovely, sensual and passion-driven moment captured with your gifted and concise quill. Euphoria, indeed!

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/15/2020 8:50:00 PM

What is life.. without a little euphoria? I'm so glad you enjoyed this short passionate poem, John. It was for me, an early segue to free verse, I think. I treasure your heartwarming comments and your impressive presence here, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Vladislav Raven

Date: 12/21/2018 7:02:00 PM

Hi Connie, An excellent sensual poem from your golden pen. Your words do set the heart afire. We are talking, cold shower time. A most creative write Susan. Love the content. So much fire within so few words.Another poetic gem from your pen Susan. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/22/2018 6:03:00 PM

I'm so happy you enjoyed this sensual write, my dear friend. I am elated by your generous comments and I am uplifted and inspired by your gracious visit, Mike. Your shining presence truly moves me to excel. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/3/2018 5:04:00 PM

It really could be a Haiku..."Us; united again, Sweetest surrender... Euphoria!" At the end... It's fire to burn through cloth...All blessing to you...A big hug too

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/5/2018 3:30:00 PM

Oh I'm so sorry for the delay in responding dear Arturo. Thank you for your wondrous comments, it's a passionate fire for sure! I relish your lovely thoughts and appreciate you for sharing them with me, mon ami. Warmest wishes to you.. and big hugs too ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/22/2017 1:28:00 PM

A sensual and passionate experience, Susan, especially where the first stanza is concerned, and which called for an encore in the 2nd! Noticeable the connection between the opening and closing words. ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/23/2017 1:45:00 PM

I'm so happy you enjoyed this sensual write Paul. I am charmed by your lovely comments and I am uplifted and encouraged by your wonderful visits. Your presence truly inspires me to excel. Warmest wishes always my dear friend.. ~Susan

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/18/2017 10:52:00 AM

It's very much like a Haiku, could easily be revised into that form. If you haven't studied Haiku, you'll see what I mean if you look for it under FORMS. This packs a sensual punch, I felt it! ... CayCay

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/18/2017 6:25:00 PM

Ohh I love Haiku CayCay and I've written about nine of them here on PS. I had never written any Haiku until I started to write them here and I found that I really love the short forms! My appreciation for short forms started with Septolet and Cinquain and then Haiku.. I'm glad you felt the sensual punch of this write CayCay. It's great to know that my words inspire the intended effect... :) and thank you for your kind comment and lovely friendship.Hugs and smiles! ~Susan