Sweet Youth of Mine

Sweet youth of mine - how you have fled. You once were blossoms on my cheek before you lost that rosy red with which you shone when at your peak! You were so fresh; you were so fair. Sweet youth of mine; how you have fled with lilac scent from springtime’s air! Now mostly grey I see ahead. Like bright leaves that the trees have shed, which then decay in autumn’s ground, Sweet youth of mine, how you have fled! You disappeared without a sound. So many dreams that I have dreamt are dying (if they’re not yet dead). For all that’s lost is my lament. Sweet youth of mine – how you have fled!
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Lillico  Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Reads beautifully!!! Congrats!
Bangalee Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 9:18 PM
just beautiful poem penned; nice to read and congrats for wining
Mcintosh Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Oh, wow... this is so amazing. I wish I could have wrote it! Love it so. A fave. God bless you always, dear heart... love, Gina
La France Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 5:15 PM
Andrea, wonderful and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Y" Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 6:25 PM
This lament rises from everyone who has crossed the jubilant and flamboyant youth ! Let us hope that each age and each season has its own thrill. You are a winner Andrea.... ! Congratulations on this well deserved win !
Lindley Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 12:28 PM
You have created an inspiring poem on a theme that is dear to this old poet's heart--YOUTH! Truly, every verse golden and a pure joy to read.. A gem and a very fine and uplifting piece. A fav... God bless,,,
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Inside the woman is still the little girl, the teenager, and the young bride so you still have it within just that the body won't cooperate with it coming out. LOL. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Sara
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 1:57 AM
I have enjoyed the consistency of this poem and the message.
Proxenos Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 10:12 AM
And so humanity will continue, one generation is born whilst one dies, when we were young, did we ever think we would get old, it never crossed our minds, yet here we are. This absolutely deserved to win dear Andrea,congratulations, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Peck Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Oh, so poignant, Andrea, and so true. I love ... how you have fled! you disappeared without a sound. It did. One day youth was gone...I think about it a lot these days. Congratulations on your win!
Skelly Avatar
December 3, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Wonderful entry into the contest. Quote: Sweet youth of mine – how you have fled! Perfect start and finish to this lovely poem....Delice
Seeker Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Oh! How did I miss out on this beautiful write? So happy to read it this morning!
Roper Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Love all the metaphors in your verse, Andrea, pretty awesome way better than my verse.
Jayasankar Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 6:27 AM
I loved your quartern Ria... "Sweet youth of mine - how you have fled... you were so fresh, you were so fair"... beautiful lines... you are always young at heart sweet friend... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
Maverick Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 4:21 AM
Good emotive write sure to score with this Is my estimate Andrea.'
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Wonderful! You’re almost always a winner! This will be!!
Romios Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 2:51 PM
Best, for first Andrea! Pangie
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December 1, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Wonderful contrast Andrea between youthful exuberance and the seemingly impenetrable grey ahead, your refraining thread line brings a reality check to each stanza, A top write, cheers David
Buhagiar Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 9:37 AM
There are many who feel that way, but I'm not going to cry over spilt milk. HUgs.
Hankins Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Such a marvelous write about the vanishing of our youth, Andrea. I thoroughly enjoyed it and wish you the very best in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:08 PM
muchas gracias!
Baker Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Great entry Andrea. The loss of youth can be somewhat overwhelming at times. Your beautiful poetry and lively spirit suggest you are not as old as your body; yet much wiser than your years. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 1:08 PM
love your assessment of me. I try very hard to keep young in mind and body. I am such a Peter Pan.
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