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"sweet Touch"

Your fingertips touch so lightly and endearing, still make my eyes roll...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/24/2010 10:14:00 AM
amazing how a simple touch can do so much (now you got me rhyming!!!) ---very sweet senryu Michael ^_^ -- nikko :)
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:37:00 PM
WEEEE! lovely, Michael nice & enjoyed! OOO, what a gift and feeling when the love and feelings never vanish. I'm glad you men come with no buttons.LOL,,,It is nice when one holds so much passion for the joy of there life, no matter the up's and downs.. love it,..p.d.
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Date: 9/23/2010 7:07:00 AM
Woo hoo, keeping the fires burning comes mind.. Enjoyed your sensual suggestive write Michael, love Wilma
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:34:00 PM
A very sensuous and passionate poem in so little words,wow!
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Date: 9/22/2010 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry~~ wow how delicious, so much love in a few words~~ wonderful
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:47:00 PM
sounds naughty....let your fingers do the walking!!
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:14:00 PM
True love has a way of doing that to a person, what is love without the passion? Excellent piece.
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:08:00 PM
Very creative and interesting Senryu with nice images, Michael
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Date: 9/22/2010 3:04:00 PM
You are most definitely a man in love, Michael! Beautifully penned. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Michael for your kind words.
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