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Sweet Susurration

sweet susurration assuaging summer's swelter . . . the whispering wind Written May 8, 2022 Now submitted for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE' Poetry Contest

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Karam Misra

Date: 5/11/2022 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Andrea! Lovely haiku. Incidentally, my entry also starts with "sweet sussuration"!

Joanna Feltham

Date: 5/11/2022 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement, such a calming scene pictured in my mind.

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/10/2022 2:37:00 PM

A very comforting haiku! CONGRATULATIONS!^JCB

Bill Baker

Date: 5/10/2022 2:34:00 PM

I like your Haiku entry, Andrea. Summer will soon be here. We're getting blown away here in Texas, 20-30mph winds almost every day this month. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill P.S. I went back and read some of your older poems from previous years, you are an amazing poetess.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2022 1:48:00 PM

Yes, spring does help you to enjoy life before the swelter of summer's heat. I enjoyed reading your very descriptive work. I like the vocabulary. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/10/2022 10:47:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your cutting edge winning haiku Andrea!

Ann Peck

Date: 5/10/2022 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea! Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/10/2022 6:51:00 AM

"susurration" - Wow! Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/10/2022 6:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! Delightful! :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/10/2022 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this write. Have a great/blessed day.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2022 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea, for winning first place in the Haiku competition. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part in my contest. I much appreciate it.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/9/2022 7:38:00 PM

Andrea, this is an exceptional haiku! Janice

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/9/2022 5:37:00 PM

Very nice haiku, Andrea. I already feel cooler on a hot day.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/9/2022 5:13:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Andrea Love it. God Bless, JB

Michael Tor

Date: 5/9/2022 4:04:00 PM

Nicely done Andrea in so few words...

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/9/2022 3:56:00 PM

Ohhh, there is nothing like the refreshment of a summer breeze slicing through the heat! Wonderfully done Andrea! Best wishes for the contest and blessings of a refreshing breeze!

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/9/2022 7:44:00 AM

Your words breathe as the seasons...well said!

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2022 7:35:00 AM

Lovely haiku Andrea, best wishes

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/8/2022 10:52:00 PM

Finely composed haku. Best for a win.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 5/8/2022 6:36:00 PM

A very pleasantly satisfying Haiku...those words just roll off the page and into the mind's sensory appreciation centers, and also pleasingly trip up the tongue....ha ha. Love it.