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I want to sleep with you forever, sweet surrender I want to love you like no one else can I want to capture your heart in serene rapture, then run forever and ever I want to climb upon a rainbow feel the wind blow, keep us together I want to trace your face to my sea of memories of where our life began I want to catch anything I can, even your yawn at dawn I want to just be here today with you, nothin, nothin will take me away from you I want to make a promise that I will love you till the last sand in our hearts is gone In heaven a new life to begin again, God's plan since time began to lead us on Sweet surrender, blue shores, songbirds, streets of gold, we will wander through 4/7/2018 Poetry Contest: Rhyme Time 2 Sponsored by Laura Loo 1.) Sweet Surrender 2.) A-B-A-A-B C-D-C-C-D

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Date: 4/25/2018 6:12:00 PM
It must be a soul union. Wonderful. Congratulations for you both. Pray that I find this Eve even though I am 65. God still hears the prayers we make in intercession for others.
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:35:00 AM
A lovely poem and beautiful sentiment Eve.
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:47:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:20:00 PM
Lovingly done and lovely to read. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/24/2018 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful romantic poem. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:55:00 AM
lovely and romantic sweet Eve, loved it, congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
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Date: 4/9/2018 12:51:00 AM
This is a heartfelt beauty, Eve! The emotions ring true! Wonderful poem! :)
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Date: 4/8/2018 1:03:00 PM
Just so beautifully emotional and soulful Eve. Breathtaking imagery of sweetest devotion and everlasting love. Best wishes for a win, my friend..
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Date: 4/8/2018 8:15:00 AM
A very loving heartfelt write Eve; good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 4/8/2018 7:28:00 AM
How sweet it is! Beautiful verses!!
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Date: 4/8/2018 2:18:00 AM
This is simply so beautiful Eve! :) Hugs!
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Date: 4/7/2018 11:54:00 PM
beautiful and romantic Eve, the poem has a lyrical feel to it:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2018 11:40:00 PM
Very romantic, Eve.
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