Sweet Spirit

God's sweet spirit fell a fresh on my broken soul now I feel complete 11-20-16 Alexis Y

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 1:07:00 PM

So much said in so few words. A wonderful Senryu.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 1:12:00 PM

Hi Afzal, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked. I appreciate your support: -) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/21/2016 2:48:00 PM

Amen to that, Alexis. Very spiritually fulfilling poem. A good poem to meditate on. This poem is soul refreshing. Ty for sharing this beautiful poem. Love always for you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2016 1:07:00 PM

heaven's magic lifts your soul.. a charming poem, alexis..huggs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/21/2016 10:54:00 AM

I'm so glad you do! Feeling complete is so beautiful. Dear....I posted on your previous comment about friends and family...I was having trouble with my computer. I don't know if the comment got posted. It was such an encouraging write about the family and all who are important to our existence. Beautiful thoughts, dear.

Alexis Y.
Date: 11/21/2016 11:05:00 AM

Hi Eileen, It's so good hearing from you. Thanks for the kind comments on my poems. I will visit you soon:-) Alexis