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Sweet Smile

~ I look towards the east at a cloud bank like mountains Tangerine rays painting swirls on the sky Standing alone as my mind starts to wander Picturing dreams while the moon waves goodbye Calling your name if the heavens will listen Asking the sun hoping it does agree For just one wish on this beautiful morning That your sweet smile is what my eyes could see ~

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/19/2019 2:01:00 PM

Sweet as sugar! ~ gw

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2019 11:50:00 AM

I am thankful to read this beautiful , peaceful poem today. Thank you for sharing Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 12:34:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness Heidi and for catching that little "oops" I made. I appreciate you my friend.

Hello There

Date: 9/19/2019 11:41:00 AM

Look, and we are all smiling... how could we not? A beautiful wish in this tender piece :')

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy your are smiling.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2019 11:23:00 AM

- A small wish ... which means a lot, Chris :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 12:31:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Anytime you leave a smile on my page, it brings one to my face. :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/19/2019 9:40:00 AM

That special smile always seems to make a day brighter...i love how you always set up the most beautiful scene to lure the reader in and then make them feel what you are feeling, as if through your own eyes...beautiful Chris :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 9:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandy. Your kind words are always something I look forward to.