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Sweet Sexteen

I saw evil last night,
evil in the form of a sweet fleshed beauty,
evil in the form of sparkling eyes,
with the fork of serpent’s tongue.

I saw evil, perhaps, not in its entirety;
as with goodness, evil is an abundant
and all consuming well.
So young, so stained by herself and others,
this child daily sought the flame, 
stealing from anyone, anything; she could.

From the fragile, translucent, moth 
to kitten’s lick, she enticed beyond bounds.
Her beauty narcotic, evil bathed in jasmine,
giving kisses to gain access to her drug of choice.
Failure’s false excuses acts dispensing sexual pleasures;
luring with ribald sensation with filthy lucre.

Flames leapt from the eyes of the sweetest face,
recalling the pill vials abundance and place;
recalling the ease of reach.

Her thrusting tongue-tip, licked and leapt.
at the drooled corners of her strawberry-pink lips.
The lips she would let his aged, sick, body, kiss,
all for the high, his legal drugs would bring.
She stay. She’d give him everything—

He didn't pay in money, surely, there was no crime?

So near death, he’d pray.
“Lord God please heal me.” He’d say.

She’d smile and the horned corners of her lips would rise.
He’d seek life’s affirmation between her thighs.
She’d stay—until he died.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Perks Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Fantastic write well~done on winning Congtatulations.
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Definitely a crime, Deb. Very well written. Loved the next to last line. Awesome! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Arowolo Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 5:56 PM
Awesome write,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win.You are wonderful and meticulous.keep it up lady.....and THANKS for all your comments and observations.May GOD bless you for having an eagle`s eye......You are the.....B..B.BEST.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Wow Debbie-this one is a little 'wild'-fantastic job! Congrats. on your win in my contest :)
M V Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your great win in the contest,Debbie!
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, Debbie
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:30 AM
Hey, I see you got a huge fan down here in jeff!! Can ya boil water?hahaha. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Congrats Debbie on another excellent win with dazzling words reflecting contest theme so perfectly luv..
Ramsdale Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Absolutely a winner I believe. Disgustingly Criminal for sure. CR
Cohan Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 6:40 PM
I WROTE HOW SUCCINCTLY YOU WROTE "I'M IN LOVE" NOW THIS EPIC POEM, TELL ME, CAN YOU BOIL WATER ALSO, CUZ IF YOU CAN I NEED YOU TO COME LIVE WITH ME...SO LONG AS YOU DON'T MIND LIVING ON THE SIDE OF A HIGHWAY....YOU TALK ABOUT BLESSINGS AND STUPH LIKE THAT.....SO FAR AS I CAN SEE YOU ARE A BLESSING I AM NOT WORTHY OF..YOUR'S IN PUKING, PUTRICATION AND PISS....YOUR FAN UNTIL I'M UNDERGROUND....~free cee!~ luvyadollface!
M V Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 1:27 AM
Beautifully presented' the lady in evil',Deb.It is great in visual effect.Have a nice day!Fabiyas
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 10:18 PM
geeez, Debs. STRONG stuff. Is it for the deep and dramatic contest? It sure does fit the bill!! I enjoyed it and the great imagery.
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