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This poem took First Place in a Spring/Summer 2015 Galaxy of Verse Contest Category.

Sweet Reward

She'd gifted me her plants, 
as she moved to an apartment, 
with no available garden space. 
When she called, we talked flowers. 
I took photos to prove 
her green thumb prevailed.

I worked in my garden today. 
So hot, sweat ran in rivulets 
down my neck, between my breasts.
Wasps harassed, threatened, 
then vanished one second after 
the eliminator can was in my hand.

Clothes plastered as a second skin, 
became wet, heavy dirt magnets.
Mulch climbed up my nose, blew into my eyes.
A sudden breeze feathered my cheek.
A Phoebe's repeated call tickled my ears,
A blood-red lily bobbed in joyful gratitude.

The orange ones she had given me,
smooth and bright as satin -
I cut, arranged in a white vase,
and took to Mother's bedside.
Her last words, soft, full of wonder, 
"Those orange lilies - so beautiful."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Poteet Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Ten years past? Still it remains a lovely Mother's Day tribute. My mom and I did genealogy together, spending hours in graveyards and libraries. Some of the best times of my older life with her. Sorry she missed the advent of Ancestry.com.
Zubair Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Nature described beautifully. Poignant write
Adams Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Thank you, Samiha Zubair, for visiting to read, and for the generous comment. Always appreciated. All the best to you.
Bartholomew Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 7:14 AM
This touched my heart :)
Adams Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Cortney. My mother was a sweetheart with a green thumb and a giving heart. All the best.
Nunez Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:59 AM
HI Cona. Loved this! I see some similarity with Debbie Guzzi's style. Such economy in words yet great imagery. And the tone...I'm a sucker for restrained, graceful and delicate story-telling which is difficult! I' sorry I should have soupmailed but since you're there...can you suggest some readings to improve my style? My words are sometimes all over the place...
Adams Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Hi Kim. Thank you so much. I wrote rhymed poetry only for so many years. When I discovered free verse, I loved the freedom of it. I've read a lot of Ted Kooser. He is a master at free verse.Thanks for the visit. All the best!
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July 1, 2015 at 12:23 AM
lovely imagery... enjoyed your poem **SKAT**
Adams Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, SKAT for the visit and for taking the time to comment. I will traipse on over and return the compliment. Blessings!
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