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This poem took First Place in a Spring/Summer 2015 Galaxy of Verse Contest Category.

She'd gifted me her plants, as she moved to an apartment, with no available garden space. When she called, we talked flowers. I took photos to prove her green thumb prevailed. I worked in my garden today. So hot, sweat ran in rivulets down my neck, between my breasts. Wasps harassed, threatened, then vanished one second after the eliminator can was in my hand. Clothes plastered as a second skin, became wet, heavy dirt magnets. Mulch climbed up my nose, blew into my eyes. A sudden breeze feathered my cheek. A Phoebe's repeated call tickled my ears, A blood-red lily bobbed in joyful gratitude. The orange ones she had given me, smooth and bright as satin - I cut, arranged in a white vase, and took to Mother's bedside. Her last words, soft, full of wonder, "Those orange lilies - so beautiful."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/14/2015 7:25:00 AM
Nature described beautifully. Poignant write
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Cona Adams
Date: 8/14/2015 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Samiha Zubair, for visiting to read, and for the generous comment. Always appreciated. All the best to you.
Date: 7/5/2015 7:14:00 AM
This touched my heart :)
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Cona Adams
Date: 7/5/2015 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Cortney. My mother was a sweetheart with a green thumb and a giving heart. All the best.
Date: 7/2/2015 10:59:00 AM
HI Cona. Loved this! I see some similarity with Debbie Guzzi's style. Such economy in words yet great imagery. And the tone...I'm a sucker for restrained, graceful and delicate story-telling which is difficult! I' sorry I should have soupmailed but since you're there...can you suggest some readings to improve my style? My words are sometimes all over the place...
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Cona Adams
Date: 7/2/2015 9:45:00 PM
Hi Kim. Thank you so much. I wrote rhymed poetry only for so many years. When I discovered free verse, I loved the freedom of it. I've read a lot of Ted Kooser. He is a master at free verse.Thanks for the visit. All the best!
Date: 7/1/2015 12:23:00 AM
lovely imagery... enjoyed your poem **SKAT**
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Cona Adams
Date: 7/2/2015 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT for the visit and for taking the time to comment. I will traipse on over and return the compliment. Blessings!

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