Sweet Release

An evening pink casts ripples from afar
Where lovers dip into a pool of rain
Emblazoned by some hundred fleeting stars;
As whispers blow on raindrops to proclaim
The height of a thrill in hours unrestrained.
Upon the sail of leaves that binds wrapped kiss
The pearl-like drops guide hands in sweet release.




Romanticism In Rime Royal Contest
Sponsor: Gautami Phookan
by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/26/2014 10:05:00 PM
Nette, ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/16/2014 6:16:00 PM
You have your own way with words, Nette. Splendid reading. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/16/2014 1:29:00 PM
Congrats Nette.
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Date: 2/16/2014 3:58:00 AM
Beautiful piece on Romanticism, Congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 2/11/2014 12:21:00 PM
Sometimes it is nice to just sit in a deck chair put your hands behind your head and soak in the wonders of a beautiful day. This poem gave me such a moment.
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Date: 2/5/2014 7:09:00 AM
Ah Nette the sheer romance of this is stunning great pen and gl in contest hugs
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:34:00 PM
Wow Nette a beautiful piece you have written here! I really enjoyed it, great write, very romantic! :) xoxoxo
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:27:00 PM
An outstanding one that you are noted for,gl luck in the contest nette. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/4/2014 10:18:00 AM
You create quite a romantic setting with your words and the style, impeccable!
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Date: 2/4/2014 10:04:00 AM
This is such a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this romantic poem Nette! What a gorgeous piece, quite the enchanting poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:48:00 AM
Gautami should like this one. Good luck with your entry.
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Date: 2/4/2014 8:50:00 AM
Phrases of passion from a brilliant creative, beautiful pen! 7+, My best Nette, chuck
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Date: 2/4/2014 8:31:00 AM
- Oh .... sweet spring ... with beautiful romance - Thank you dear friend, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest. - Have a great Tuesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2014 8:09:00 AM
Romantic, indeed, my dear Nette! Again...I'm amazed by your word chose. No idea how you can come up with it....I'm still stuck in the common...there you go lighting up the sky with these kinds of phrases....whispers blow on raindrops...sail of leaves that bind wrapped kiss....amazing. Hugs
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