Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme Royal

Sweet Release

An evening pink casts ripples from afar
Where lovers dip into a pool of rain
Emblazoned by some hundred fleeting stars;
As whispers blow on raindrops to proclaim
The height of a thrill in hours unrestrained.
Upon the sail of leaves that binds wrapped kiss
The pearl-like drops guide hands in sweet release.




Romanticism In Rime Royal Contest
Sponsor: Gautami Phookan
by nette onclaud

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Skat A February 26, 2014 at 10:05 PM Nette, ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~

Joyce Johnson February 16, 2014 at 6:16 PM You have your own way with words, Nette. Splendid reading. Love, Joyce

Kayod5 Kayode February 16, 2014 at 1:29 PM Congrats Nette.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2014 at 3:58 AM Beautiful piece on Romanticism, Congrats on the win, nette

Darren Watson February 11, 2014 at 12:21 PM Sometimes it is nice to just sit in a deck chair put your hands behind your head and soak in the wonders of a beautiful day. This poem gave me such a moment.

Shadow Hamilton February 5, 2014 at 7:09 AM Ah Nette the sheer romance of this is stunning great pen and gl in contest hugs

Chris Boskovski February 4, 2014 at 7:34 PM Wow Nette a beautiful piece you have written here! I really enjoyed it, great write, very romantic! :) xoxoxo

Kayod5 Kayode February 4, 2014 at 4:27 PM An outstanding one that you are noted for,gl luck in the contest nette. Kayod5.

Rora Onna February 4, 2014 at 10:18 AM You create quite a romantic setting with your words and the style, impeccable!

Russell Sivey February 4, 2014 at 10:04 AM This is such a beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this romantic poem Nette! What a gorgeous piece, quite the enchanting poem, Great Work!!

Robert Pettit February 4, 2014 at 9:48 AM Gautami should like this one. Good luck with your entry.

Chuck Melugin February 4, 2014 at 8:50 AM Phrases of passion from a brilliant creative, beautiful pen! 7+, My best Nette, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2014 at 8:31 AM - Oh .... sweet spring ... with beautiful romance - Thank you dear friend, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest. - Have a great Tuesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian February 4, 2014 at 8:09 AM Romantic, indeed, my dear Nette! Again...I'm amazed by your word chose. No idea how you can come up with it....I'm still stuck in the common...there you go lighting up the sky with these kinds of phrases....whispers blow on raindrops...sail of leaves that bind wrapped kiss....amazing. Hugs