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Sweet Long-Awaited Spring

It’s here—sweet long-awaited spring. New blooms smell lovely; skies are blue. The trilling birds are on the wing. Earth has awakened; life is new. New blooms smell lovely; skies are blue. Kids dash outside to have a fling. Earth has awakened; life is new. This time exudes a unique zing. Kids dash outside to have a fling. The joys of spring seem overdue. This time exudes a unique zing. Who could resist the springtime view? The joys of spring seem overdue for those who love what warm days bring. Who could resist a springtime view when not just birds but people sing? For those who love what warm days bring, the trilling birds are on the wing when not just birds but people sing. It’s here—sweet long-awaited spring. May 8, 2022 Entered in the L. Milton Hankins contest Rhyming Pantoum of Five Stanzas

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Date: 5/19/2022 3:47:00 PM
Love those trilling birds on the wing!! Sweet pantoum, janice.
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Date: 5/19/2022 6:36:00 AM
This Pantoum is most excellent. The imagery is wonderful, and your rhyme and meter are spot on. I am also impressed at your punctuation as I just know the basics. A job very well done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/19/2022 2:43:00 PM
Charles, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 5/9/2022 11:36:00 AM
I am still awaiting some warm sunshine, but so far, only Climate Change! Aloha!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/9/2022 9:09:00 PM
In Mississippi, the temps are climbing. It will be ninety by the end of the week. Thanks, Rico. Janice
Date: 5/9/2022 4:35:00 AM
Much enjoyed this song of spring...joy exudes through your words, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/9/2022 9:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 5/9/2022 12:22:00 AM
Winter is well behind us now Janice, now a gloomy memory. Not a lover of this form but you made it look easy. Good luck and have a great week. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/9/2022 9:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. It wasn't easy. LOL! Janice

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