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Sweet Lips

Feeling sweet lips pressed on mine I remember those long-ago days in my prime Such tender moments Except for our halitosis Kinda destroy the passion at the time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/1/2020 10:39:00 AM
A passion killer for sure, but even worse was garlic breath, can't stand the stuff.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2020 11:10:00 AM
Hmm! Have to agree! There's probably other disgusting ones! LOL But I ignored them!
Date: 6/1/2020 8:43:00 AM
LOL! Yeah, nothing like bad breath to extinguish the passion ;D, sext turns stenchy pretty fast. xomo!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/1/2020 9:47:00 AM
Fun eh! Halitosis quickly put a kibosh on the passion! LOL Of course, that NEVER happened to me... I ALWAYS had sweet-smelling breath! Ahem! XOX

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