Sweet Eyes

She entered with such style and grace then smiled with those soft sweet eyes Brought warmth and kindness to this face then held me tight to sooth these cries Once bright blue skies turn now to gray Dawn is fading and now in disguise Our herd's thinning, for friends I pray She comforts with those soft sweet eyes When times are tough and life is rough She steps right in and holds my hand When you get down and had enough Needing courage to rise and stand She'll touch your soul with words so wise and smile with those soft sweet eyes

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/8/2015 5:14:00 PM

really very beautiful sonnet tim sparkled through your pen dear pal

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2015 3:29:00 AM

This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/5/2015 7:54:00 AM

surely romancing the page with this superb, sweet piece, tim..huggs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2015 11:36:00 PM

Chicago is one of my fav teams, Other than the Habs, I love all the teams in the original six!!! That was real hockey!

Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2015 11:39:00 PM

Come down on Wednesday I'm sure I can rustle up some tix ....

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2015 11:25:00 PM

That's tempting, the food and the idea! I just might! And by the way, I think we both cheering for the same team now!!!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2015 11:32:00 PM

You must have learned to dislike them...there is plenty of room on our bandwagon and you can even wear your team sweater if you like : )

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/4/2015 11:02:00 PM

Beautiful, I am waiting for part 2 "Sweet lies" LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2015 11:18:00 PM

You can write that. I'm hungry gonna eat some sweet potato fries

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/4/2015 10:28:00 PM

What a beauty Tim, wonderful expressions!

Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thank you very much Upma.....Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/4/2015 7:10:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, That s what friends are for I do believe, to be there in the right moments. Im sure you ve been there for all your friends through thick and thin Tim. Such a sinciere and amazing poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 6/4/2015 11:20:00 PM

Thanks Charma for being there during these tough times..... Hugs Tim