Sweet Dreams Part 1

Cold nights in darkness
In darkness I lay
Tossing and turning
Waiting for the day
My mind is sleepless
Never stopping to rest
My mind won't have sleep
As a regular guest

I walked in bright forests
On an old beaten trail
When out of nowhere
Out walked a snail
"Well, good day sir.
My name is Chance."
I must be sleeping
Or in some sweet trance

Me and this snail walked
Down that old beaten trail
When we stumbled upon
A quiet green vale
With no path down
No path to descend
Mr. Chance left me
He was no good friend

I climbed down great rocks
Small ledges and crags
When out of thin air
Appeared a man in rags
"Hello dear boy,
quite a climb, is it not?"
Am I dreaming?
Or maybe I'm shot

This old man was odd
Not a normal old man
He was quite muscular
With a dark olive tan
His name was Grandpa
Not a grandpa of mine
He told me I'd make it
And that I'd do fine

I must be wigging
Or at least I am ill
Or maybe, just maybe
I took a great spill
This dream is too great
For it to be real
I think I like it
I hope I don't heal

So where was I?
Talking to the old man
When I reached the bottom
He giggled and ran
I followed his footsteps
Along a cool bright stream
When suddenly I was
Ejected from my dream

Morning has come
Too early I'd say
I'd like to dream more
But my dream cannot stay

-kp-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 9:26 PM
Kyle, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Kyle. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 1:15 PM
This was very thoughtful, introspective. Well done, and worthy to be among the featured poems this week. Congratulations! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations Kyle on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Dreams carry many important messages, I believe possibly from angels watching over us. Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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November 9, 2008 at 4:13 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 2:49 PM
At least YOU care if I die or not..... I saw your pic on you're the one with the drink in your hand right?? Cause if you are you're smexy...... And YES I said smexy instead of y (I know I'm weird) Have you seen my pi yet his last name is Gray..... OH YEA!!!! Thank You for makin me feel happy for the first time today.... ;)))
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 1:18 PM
Should I kill myself??
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 11:49 AM
Hey tell me the truth am I annoyin you at all??
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 10:13 AM
GOD!!!!!!!!!!! I my life so bad right now that it's not even funny..... So, my friend is smokin you know what and he's also my Ex-Boyfriend.... And I'm SOOOOO depressed I don't know why I just want to curl up in a ball and just D I E!!!! AHHHHHHH!!! :(((((((((
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 8:26 AM
No, cause that makes me feel bad now... Go do what you have to do...
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 5:54 AM
Hey, Sooo, My mom s gone all day today and I'm soooooooo freakin bored.... If you can talk then maybe I won't be so bored anymore......
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 4:05 AM
Have you ever seen the show TrueBlood??
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:33 PM
His last name is Gray
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:32 PM
Well, night love ya' ;))
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:30 PM
YES!!!! He does live in missouri
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:29 PM
Or look up Sam Broken Beyond Repair
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:26 PM
First go on to m y s p a c e then look up Day-V And At the end of Day-V add an XD
Perkins Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:21 PM
cant get to a myspace called www.myspace.com/day-v it wont let you. Sooo...I dunno what to do? lol
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:20 PM
Now that makes me want to meet you all the more....... So did you see my picture yet?
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:14 PM
I think west chester... In south lebanon is where I live
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:13 PM
I live in west chester,Ohio
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:10 PM
Now I'm all shky and nervous.. I can't help wat I feel though you know wat I mean? And yes you are a really likeable guy.. And for some strange reason I feel safer when I'm talkin to you..
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:04 PM
Cause it's kinda .......................... you....... Sorry...........
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 7:01 PM
No it's kinda someone else........ I'm kinda scared to tell you....... But I will any ways cause I know that you wouldn't get upset at me..... Would you??
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