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Sweet Dreams In C - Collaboration With Darren White

black and white tones ring together echoes over two tone photos scrolling along memories colored in remembrance happenings in sepia when we were small imagination animated claude leading the way moonlight illuminates a kaleidescope display moon shines its silvery rays, soft music plays around the room I will sleep soon key notes weave harmonies whipperwill and chickadees night's sweet lullaby song gently sings of rest and sleep last notes fade away musical dreams in C eat away sharp edges I smile in my sleep

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/13/2017 10:50:00 AM

At my grandparents cottage up north and all the night music begins. For a child it is a part of their magical world. Your collaboration returned me that time so exquisitely. Thank you.

Sara Ella
Date: 10/14/2017 9:58:00 PM

Thank you Patricia :)

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 10:36:00 AM

This reminded me of years ago when I awoke to a whole symphony of sounds going on in my head! I love this SO much, you guys! Great collab

Sara Ella
Date: 8/1/2017 5:52:00 PM

Thank you Rick :) It was fun to collaborate with Darren - his writing is so good! Music is, to me, a wonderful way to express ourselves. You, my friend, have so much music in you <3 Glad that you share it with us.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/11/2017 12:13:00 PM

Hello Sara. I hope this day finds you well. This entry is beautiful. Sweet Dreams indeed. I love the title by the way. This co-write is very smooth and it flowed as one. Thank you for sharing your talent. May all dreams be sweet and when awake as well. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done entirely. PS: Hello Darren

Sara Ella
Date: 7/11/2017 2:20:00 PM

Hello Lisa, I really appreciate your wonderful comments - thank you so much! <3 :)

Darren White

Date: 7/11/2017 1:58:00 AM

I loved this poem Sara, was great working with you :) Sweet, soft and lovely!

Sara Ella
Date: 7/11/2017 7:24:00 AM

Yes! :) This was fun and thank you! <3

Joseph May

Date: 7/10/2017 12:07:00 PM

How sweet the musical dreams in C, in tones of ebony and ivory...A lovely Collaboration you two

Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :) This was so much fun to do!

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/10/2017 8:15:00 AM

I almost always listen to music when I go to bed. What a peaceful way to go to sleep. Wonderful collaboration, Sara and Darren:)

Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Daniel :) It was inspired by the music of Debussy <3

Chris Green

Date: 7/10/2017 6:56:00 AM

Wow, this was fantastic . I love everything about this. It has a melodic feel to it and brings a song to life within the lines. This was great you two.

Sara Ella
Date: 7/10/2017 12:57:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris :) The music is key! It is the coolest feeling to be able to create poems with such talented poets. <3 This collaboration with Darren was so much fun too! :D

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/9/2017 5:21:00 PM

Very nice collaboration! I enjoyed this. Great ending too :)

Sara Ella
Date: 7/9/2017 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Heidi :) Glad you liked it! <3

Tim Smith

Date: 7/9/2017 3:59:00 PM

So beautiful you two...a favorite

Sara Ella
Date: 7/9/2017 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Tim <3 It was fun to create and thank you so much for the fave :D