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a dreamcatcher web captures my innermost thoughts in the land of nod 11/13/18

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/17/2018 11:33:00 PM

Sweet n Dreamy.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/17/2018 2:29:00 PM

Hi Jan, love the content of this senryu. I am a dreamcatcher of sorts. The wolf ever guards dreams just like a dreamcatcher. Wonderful write Jan. Have a wonderful end to your Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/16/2018 6:12:00 PM

Dreams are funny things Jan. I seldom remember any of mine and the Ones I do remember are very very strange defy logic or description. Love Nodding Off . Sweet Dreams

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/16/2018 3:35:00 PM

Wow ! so pretty and so colorful . May you nod happily in your lala land of joy .

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/15/2018 8:20:00 PM

A dreamy senryu Jan! I have a dream catcher above my bed. I love the lore behind them. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2018 8:06:00 PM

that is so clever, Jan. It's awesome to me that all over the world people now know about these dream catchers. I have a big one hanging off the mirror in my car. I just love them

John Michaels

Date: 11/15/2018 10:35:00 AM

I really like this one, Jan. Elegant and eloquant! All the best, John.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/15/2018 12:04:00 AM

So you have been to Canada!!!! :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/14/2018 4:27:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Jan: I've had those dreams at times.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/14/2018 1:37:00 PM

A delightful poem, Jan! I too have experienced the wonders of dreamland! Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2018 1:01:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan! … And isn't it interesting that dreamcatchers are NOT electronic? --Something that's popular that's not digital, for a change And that's no dream either. Amazing. :) gw

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/14/2018 6:40:00 AM

Not only beautiful Jan, but clever poetry also. love it//Harry

Constance La France

Date: 11/13/2018 11:26:00 PM

Jan, beautiful, it captured me and love the image too ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/13/2018 7:25:00 PM

This poem is delightful, delicious, and takes me instantly to dreamland, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thanks caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 11/13/2018 6:14:00 PM

Fantastic poem. I enjoy being in the land of nod. I get some great ideas.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/16/2018 5:31:00 PM

Me too bette, I often wake with a poem in my head! Hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/13/2018 4:54:00 PM

Wouldn't it be great to catch some dreams and watch them again. Of course there would have to be a delete button to ditch the nightmares. lol. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2018 5:01:00 PM

That would be fascinating tom:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man

Date: 11/13/2018 3:11:00 PM

Jan.. me likes! The land of nod is sometimes more authentic and desired than this rat race life we often live. Humor is magic and you are a beautiful and skilled magician!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2018 3:24:00 PM

We need to be able to escape from the complexities of life sometimes the only way is through our dreams , so good to see you back LM:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2018 3:06:00 PM

I wish I were enjoying the land of nod right now, I am so tired today. Beautifully done Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2018 3:08:00 PM

Me too Chris I had a dreadful night...may be that is what also inspired my thoughts, I wrote this whilst traveling on a bus today lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/13/2018 3:04:00 PM

nice one, jan! i love the whole idea of dreamcatchers...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2018 3:06:00 PM

I don't possess one just saw it in a shop, not surely I want my dreams catching I have some very odd thoughts lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2018 1:48:00 PM

- Yes, it does :) - Lovely written, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2018 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise I saw one hanging in a shop and it inspired the poem:-) hugs Jan xx