Sweet Cottage Home

We trudge and trip
along the slick, stony path
Squishy moss covered rocks and roots
propel our wet sandaled feet forward.

Treacherous trail ends
in a sun washed clearing
Tall pines tower,
solemn totems, encircling
the idyllic patch of heaven
in the woods.

Warm, happy sunshine greets
our cold, damp sandals
now forgotten in 
the glory of arrival!

The sweet, white cottage
with perfect blue shutters,
embracing the dusty, dirty 
panes of glass,
like the warmth of my mother's arms.

Solid fir plank door
cheerful, red apple paint
waits with iron latch, 
ready to welcome us in.

Again and again.....
years, decades, and generations 
of Miller's welcomed back
to their sweet cottage home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Austin Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Back in Kansas now. For sure - if it looks like your description - aint no place like home. Congrats on the selection. daver
Shaw Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by with your congrats, Daver! I appreciate your interest. Kind regards, Kimberly
Nunez Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Lovely imagery, Kimberly. You've captured the warmth and welcoming comfort felt by those who dwelt in the cottage. A 7. Smiles. Kim Patrice
Shaw Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Hi Kim! Thank you so much for your kind comments and support. I am new here, and to poetry, so any and all critique is very welcome, as I seek to learn and improve my writings. much love, Kimberly
Adams Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Love it, Kimberly. Charming.
Shaw Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Hi Cona, so nice to meet you :) I am fairly new here and really appreciate your very kind remark. I have never shown my poetry to anyone, so it is very interesting to have feedback. Thank you! Love & hugs, Kim
Ellison Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:23 AM
What a sweet, heart warming picture you paint, my dear Kimberly! Love, Jack xxx
Shaw Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 5:34 PM
Thank you so much for your kindnesss, Jack, and for stopping by to read my poems! You are a sweetheart. Love & hugs, Kim
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