Sweet Baby

Sweet baby, another evening shows itself; Another day has closed. This is the time I long for you and mourne my choice the most. 

I wonder how I have the right to feel, the pain and loss I do.
 It was afterall MY decision to refuse change which meant lose you. 

At first you were just sickness; morning, noon and night.
I see it now, my darling, how you were just growing with all your might.

I pray you know sweet baby, wherever you might be, how frightened and lost I was, I did not feel like me. 

And with that one scared choice, at the time I thought was right, the flicker of hope and the future, went out just like a light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 4:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kinch  Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Such a poignant write Gaby. Bless you.
Wanter Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Oh, Gaby, welcome to PoetrySoup. Your first poem is heart-wrenching, but so well expressed.
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