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Sweet Autumnal Melody: Double Swap Quatrain

Autumn sings, a sweet melody, Dressed splendidly, as a lady, Waving away, the dreams of springs, A sweet melody, autumn sings. Night absorbs, the lights of the day, The dreams of springs, waving away, Pale white moon, shining like an orb, The lights of the day, night absorbs. Mystic autumn, showering boon, Shining like an orb, pale white moon, Earth delights, becoming wholesome, Showering boon, mystic autumn. Singing merrily, fairies, sprites, Becoming wholesome, earth delights, Sounds of autumn call lovingly, Fairies, sprites, singing merrily. The Double Swap Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 7/18/2025 10:12:00 PM
This is so pretty. I like the idea of fantasy in it with the sprites and fairies. Good luck in the contest
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/19/2025 2:33:00 AM
Glad you liked it. Thank you.
Date: 7/8/2025 11:29:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup. So glad I found your lovely song of autumn, Vandana, filled with the bounty of autumn's rainbow. Just a little FYI - the contest requires 16 or 20 lines. As this is so lovely you might want to think about adding another four line stanza to bring your poem up to 16 lines. So many people have helped me with contest entries, I wanted to do the same for you. It is one of the amazing qualities of the poets here on this site. Blessings! Best wishes for the contest. to you.
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/8/2025 10:14:00 PM
Oh! Thank you so much for pointing that out. I will add one more stanza to this poem. Really very grateful for your help.
Date: 7/8/2025 2:25:00 AM
l love Autumn poems, my favourite season. Nicely written poem, thank you for sharing it with us. J
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/8/2025 2:49:00 AM
Much obliged for the heartfelt words.
Date: 7/8/2025 12:23:00 AM
Nicely done. Wishing best for the contest
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/8/2025 1:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. Yes, I am " Sanatani Bhartiya".
Date: 7/7/2025 11:06:00 AM
Hello Dr. Van dana Sharma, A beautiful poem about autumn. blessings my friend. /Ddrlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2025 11:51:00 AM
Hello Dr. Van Dan Sharma, thank you for this lovely thought. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene./
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/7/2025 11:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. May the autumn colours spread every where

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