Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

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Sweats and Sweets - Collab With James Fraser

SWEATS and SWEETS

Shooting sighs and moans we fired last night still glows
As tangoed silhouetted shadows hungered love dancing
Peeping breeze outside match our whispers and calls flow
Desiring to dip and sway like leaves our top wanting
Our hands and lips pastel strokes to light brushes show

Two bared torso's touching amidst silken sheets warmed
Daring palms to fingertips send fevers upon hungry hips
Heartbeats stomps and thumps like bass drums stormed
Thrusts and pumps to nerves draw carousels of round trips
Stirring sweats to trail slow on curves adorned

Sweet scented heart lips in nonstop loving caress
As tempos rising aplenty voice fusion fueled cries
Torso's now blossom blessed by their loving impress
Gyration waves ebb after reaching heavenly skies
Legs twine, breaths calm, sated souls fall finesse
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©J. A. Fraser and O. E. Guillermo 
17.14pm, May 24, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2015 at 5:08 PM Those two words are taken to passion's limits in this one, Olive!! Great example of your contest theme. You and James did very well together! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 4, 2015 at 5:02 AM thank you so much Andie.. :)! yes this how I do with every contest theme I will offer Andie. :D as this mu gesture to thank James for his support to me.. :D! in so many ways........... hugs!

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2015 at 2:09 PM Passionate entry..Sara..Thanks for stopping by.. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 4, 2015 at 5:04 AM thank you so much Sara.. : =')

Ravi Sathasivam June 2, 2015 at 8:40 AM Excellent. Lovely Collaboration. Enjoyed. Tfs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 2, 2015 at 9:53 AM thank you so much Ravi.. :)!

Harry Horsman June 2, 2015 at 8:10 AM Love this,,wonderful collab.. you certainly choose a brilliant partner Olive love what you write it is so inspiring...... James Fraser June 2, 2015 at 1:31 PM Thank you Harry for your kind comment, I'm lost for words. Writing with Olive is an absolute joy, James :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 2, 2015 at 9:32 AM Thank you so much Harry.. :)!! James will be happy reading your praises... :)! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 2, 2015 at 8:53 AM Hi Rhonda, I meant to tease and tickle those the minds of the poets here.. :)! a puzzling theme but when given a time to think on it, it tackles lots of different subjects.. :)!!! you are welcome. I hope you will join.. :)!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 31, 2015 at 11:37 PM A fantastic, passionate flow of lines between the two of you! I wasn't sure what you meant by Sweats and Sweets, but this gave me an idea...thanks for sharing. Hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 3, 2015 at 9:10 PM thanks much Rhonda.. =') we did this to provide examples of what we are looking for.. =') thanks much!~Olive Eloisa ..=")

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2015 at 2:02 PM passion overflows through this splendid collab.. you both make great music together!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2015 at 7:33 PM Thank you so much Nette.. :) hugs back..

Emile Pinet May 27, 2015 at 1:28 PM This poem plays with words to hint at the sexual story heating underneath the weight of all these burlesque and colorful words. A sensual poem that flaunts erotic thoughts and has fun with our desires to be entertained by thoughts of a sexual nature. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2015 at 7:32 PM Wow this such a comment Emile... but this not how I expect it much... indeed like what James said to me its a play of words that the interpretation is left to readers though on mine I only stick on the theme..

Kp Nunez May 26, 2015 at 5:42 AM NICE! Glad to see a new post from you, Olive. Breathlessly passionate words entwine in this collab. 7. Congrats, you two! HUgs! :-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2015 at 7:29 PM Thank you so much Kim.. I didn't realize how passionate this is until Ive read the comments below.. when i made this with James I only stick on the theme.. of how will sweats be produced then later sweets.. i have in mind 4 concepts now but then I just let James chose for us to focus on.. and there I just stick on..

Paul Callus May 25, 2015 at 4:40 PM What a sensual and passionate collaboration ... goes beyond imagination! You two work very well together. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2015 at 2:43 AM Thank you Paul.. :)!

Sara Kendrick May 25, 2015 at 4:03 PM Passionate collaboration..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2015 at 2:41 AM Thank you Sara... :)!

Skat A May 25, 2015 at 3:18 PM Stunning collaboration Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 26, 2015 at 11:33 AM thanks much Skat.. :)!

James Fraser May 25, 2015 at 3:04 PM I enjoy writing with you little one, and so look forward to our next collab. Imagination is wonderful, when two similar minds combine, it's a win win when it comes to writing, and in life. Warm ((hugs)) always~Dino James xx James Fraser June 3, 2015 at 2:58 PM We'll have themes and themes Little One, so looking forward to writing more and more, hugs//Dino James xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 26, 2015 at 11:27 AM Huge JAmes, think of another theme.. :D :P I thought of this one so I dare you to think of another.. :) hugs back~olive eloisa xxx

Aiyah Torres May 25, 2015 at 2:59 PM breathless... when I finished the last line of this brilliant poem... sweats and sweets.. what a great collab with James!! You are both talented and romantic ^_^ Nette Onclaud May 27, 2015 at 2:00 PM let's go aya! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 26, 2015 at 10:51 AM thanks much Aiyah.. :) glad you are there.. :)!!! weeee ngkita kmi ni Nette.. :)! hope next time kasama k din.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2015 at 2:15 PM - A beautiful and romantic poem, Olive & James - Well done by both of you (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 26, 2015 at 10:50 AM thank you so much Anne Lise... :)!!! hugs and hugs,.. :)!

Cyndi Macmillan May 25, 2015 at 11:12 AM Whew! (heart pounding, dizzy, in the best way ;) ) My goodness... is it HOT in here? Enjoyed the steam! Now, I need something cold to drink! Hope you are well, Olive :) Cheers. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2015 at 8:51 PM Cheers Cyndi.. :)! Im doing alright better these days now... :)! yes, lets go enjoy some drinks. Hehehe just a pure taunt on the imagination... :)!

Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 10:55 AM such a beautiful passionate write Olive and james - may your pens always flow with golden ink:-) Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2015 at 8:46 PM Thanks mych Jan... :) wasn't so into writing these past dayz as been busy... i think if i wrote i will only write about struggles ... its only lately Im feeling lighthearted... thank you for your suppprt... :)! Im glad.. hugs mumuch.. and yes so long as my muse still bubbling il write.

Nandita Das May 25, 2015 at 9:57 AM Beautiful. Sensual. Lovely flow...A passionate write. 7 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2015 at 2:16 PM Thank you for taking time to pass by and dropping a comment. ;)

Constance La France May 25, 2015 at 9:12 AM Olive, so passionate and sexy, seamless, you both did a fantastic job working together on this write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, summer memory Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 25, 2015 at 2:25 PM Thank you for appreciating.. :) weeee like I said playful taunts and use of words.. :)