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Swan On a Lake

delicate arched neck gracefulness beyond compare she uplifted the lake I watched entranced had never seen such beauty a contrast to the dark murky water announcing spring she began to groom every movement a ballet for the first time I understood the term swan lake

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Date: 3/16/2021 12:09:00 PM
'she uplifted the lake' -- she must be some swan! Swan Lake, Swan Song, and Swan Knee River. lol. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2021 8:28:00 PM
She was something! This was inspired by a lovely swan photo!
Date: 3/15/2021 8:38:00 PM
“every movement a ballet”—they are such graceful creatures and add elegance to otherwise unremarkable lakes—I hadnt noticed the last until you made the point. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2021 8:28:00 PM
They are truly exquisite in their movement and grace.

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