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Swan Lake

Umbrellas in step with dapper canes. An etching of skates on ballroom ice. Swan lake where a notable prince reigns. Sliding gracefully, slippery, nice. Whirling, twirling, Wintery engaging. Bronze sculptures, still, statuesque, moving. Ivy, too picture perfect, celebrating. Angel skirts and top hats, flying, bowing.

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Date: 1/5/2025 6:28:00 AM
Love the imagery Kim really enjoyed this one from you. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2025 10:49:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Mike!
Date: 1/3/2025 5:04:00 PM
This is so breathtaking - made me feel in the Wintery mood, it's enchanting, like your poetry <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2025 6:39:00 PM
Yay!
Date: 1/2/2025 8:51:00 PM
Lovely images! Gorgeous poem. The winter scenery you have drawn is alluring. Wish you a happy New Year, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2025 8:32:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed the imagery, dear Valsa! Happy New Year!
Date: 1/1/2025 7:53:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery here. Picturesque. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2025 6:53:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs and Happy new Year!
Date: 1/1/2025 2:06:00 PM
I have heard that Swan Lake is a beautiful ballet bar none. Your poem enriches the scenery and frivolity of winter skaters.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2025 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! Happy New Year!
Date: 1/1/2025 12:17:00 PM
hi Kim, your imagery use the words just the way you put things together. ? Stunning!You remind me of an the beauty that God created the universe with. Here we are 2025 and I know it’s going to be one that we will enjoy. Keep up the artistic work. Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2025 1:21:00 PM
Pangie, thank you kindly for your comment! I so appreciate you! Hugs!
Date: 1/1/2025 10:29:00 AM
- Creative and an admirable picture, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2025 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Happy 2025 with many blessings for you and yours! You are such a good friend on PS! xx

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