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Suspended In Time

He was standing there, like a painting by Raphael, Above a parking garage, for show, For all to see, behind a bay window, A forgotten resident of our Daytona Beach Hotel. And I stared up in awe and dismay, Stunned, for *Ariadne, in her grand design A spell in time had placed upon this piano divine; And to my child I said: “Look! There’s Kay!” Like you my old friend solitary he waits Suspended, timeless, his noble frame Caught behind the glass; but still a flame His passion stoked, flooding the gates Rusted closed. So through the corridors In search we went, opening every door Until his dark silent presence I glanced, And on his battered keys a melody I chanced. And he, rasping at first, soon his chords laid bare And his soul released in the deepest of flair. *Ariadne: my friend Kay associates ‘Ariane’ with a higher power or the hand of fate. (In Greek mythology, Ariadne is associated with mazes and labyrinths because she helped Theseus ‘conquer’ the labyrinth and kill the Minotaur).

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Date: 4/7/2017 9:37:00 PM
Wow, wow! Such a gift, this poem, Anne-Marie. My daughter adores Michael Jackson, and his version of SMILE is so poignant given all his experiences, then death. Yet, his music gives joy across the globe, day by day. You definitely got a deep and universal message here (I feel it, but don't ask me to explain it). Shalom/Blessings. Will & be enough, or do we recall EIGHT IS ENOUGH for this time? A. Neil Deo
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/10/2017 9:57:00 PM
Anil, thank you from the bottom of my heart for this incredibly generous review. Sometimes, in the most unlikely of places, there are things that touch your heart, put a smile on your face, a spring in your step, and bring you back to those you love:)
Date: 3/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Jimmy Durante and Mrs. Calabash wherever you are. Think of Corregidor when I see your name. Association has much to do with poetry writing and understanding what you are writing about. We will be staying at Animal Kingdom for a week in October. Am looking forward to it. We are Holland America freaks also. Should have you buy my sister's house that is up for sale in Lauderdale area.
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Date: 3/28/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you for introducing me to this wonderful pianist/comedian and to the island/battle of Corregidor. I did like Florida very much, but I'm still very attached to the rolling hills and change of seasons we experience in Mark Twain's land.:)
Date: 3/21/2017 1:08:00 PM
WOW beautiful poem. loved every part of it
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:24:00 PM
I am really glad you liked it Sofia:)
Date: 3/21/2017 12:48:00 PM
Wow this is stunning as Darren states...I love how friends can inspire us.
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:23:00 PM
Good friends bring the smile in the ink of our pen. Thank you for your kind review Tim:)
Date: 3/20/2017 10:40:00 AM
Anne-Marie, this is simply stunning! I love your poem very much. I have no words for it, just GREAT poetry....(I have written a Smile poem with the same music, how coincidental)
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words Darren. I'm going to look up your Smile poem:) Isn't Chaplin the Best?
Date: 3/20/2017 10:15:00 AM
My goodness Anne-Marie. Good Morning. I'm very impressed with this entry. Poetry is about heart soul and expression. You have expressed entirely. Just know this is marvelous poetry. Well done throughout. And yes we reviewers thank you for sharing the beautiful music. That was such a bonus.
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:35:00 PM
It is always a pleasure to read your generous comments Lisa. The truth is my best friend and music are so close to my heart they are like a spontaneous inspiration.
Date: 3/20/2017 10:08:00 AM
I think you just might be a poet! This is wonderful!
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Date: 3/20/2017 9:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind endorsement Mike.
Date: 3/20/2017 9:59:00 AM
So beautiful, Anne-Marie!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/20/2017 9:24:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it kim:)

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