Suspended

The pulse of life is altered,
a dimension set apart
closed in behind streaming window panes.
Half of life falls away . . .
I wonder why it seemed consequential yesterday.

Suspended . . .
unshelved a world of joys duty pushes back,
sweet pleasures always whispering,
but out voiced by louder tongues:
books and music,
fragrant kitchen scents,
fireside soup suppers with soft voiced friends, 
some decades or even centuries old.

Blessed refreshment rainy days bring to earth,
but miracles they perform for drought encrusted minds.

Copyright, September 9, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Haight Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Hi Faye, I really enjoyed your poem. Yes, being "trapped" inside on a rainy or snowy day, forces us to pause, catch our breath, and enjoy more of life's simple pleasures. Congratulations on your win. Sanddra
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Faye. Rainy day can be so much more than just dreary.
Sietesantos Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:49 AM
Congrats on your beautiful poem and well-deserved win, Faye! I can definitely identify with the "fireside sour suppers." Excellent write! Pandita
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:32 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... and just as beautiful 2nd place! - (I do not always agree with the "judge") - I enjoy reading yours, Faye !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:16 AM
Nicely worded poem, Faye, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:43 AM
beautifully penned free verse Faye many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Gasun Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:02 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Faye. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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