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The pulse of life is altered, a dimension set apart closed in behind streaming window panes. Half of life falls away . . . I wonder why it seemed consequential yesterday. Suspended . . . unshelved a world of joys duty pushes back, sweet pleasures always whispering, but out voiced by louder tongues: books and music, fragrant kitchen scents, fireside soup suppers with soft voiced friends, some decades or even centuries old. Blessed refreshment rainy days bring to earth, but miracles they perform for drought encrusted minds. Copyright, September 9, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 10/10/2014 3:22:00 PM
Hi Faye, I really enjoyed your poem. Yes, being "trapped" inside on a rainy or snowy day, forces us to pause, catch our breath, and enjoy more of life's simple pleasures. Congratulations on your win. Sanddra
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Faye. Rainy day can be so much more than just dreary.
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful poem and well-deserved win, Faye! I can definitely identify with the "fireside sour suppers." Excellent write! Pandita
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:32:00 AM
- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... and just as beautiful 2nd place! - (I do not always agree with the "judge") - I enjoy reading yours, Faye !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:16:00 AM
Nicely worded poem, Faye, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:43:00 AM
beautifully penned free verse Faye many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/10/2014 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Faye. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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