Suspended

The air is clear & crisp its feel While foliage full, the trees are still A breath indrawn my senses tell! I dread December as the devil dreads hell. © Joe Maverick

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Nathan D.

Date: 11/13/2015 10:58:00 AM

read it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 10:03:00 PM

Joe, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

Daver Austin

Date: 4/11/2013 12:30:00 PM

That breath a harbinger of the season to come. Like the style and the sensation. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2013 11:36:00 PM

returning yet again to this one , a personal favorite of mine that you have written as I dread the winter months as well, Only January I dread even more than January!! thanks so much for your comments today , Joe.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/14/2012 2:24:00 PM

When "the trees are still", they too are probably thinking that they "dread December'', Joe.:( "suspended" is a fitting title for as much to you as, it might be for them. Still, the blasted snow is gone...for now! Love, Mikki :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 7:28:00 PM

returning to one that I have seen and methinks I have seen them all. anyway, this is one I sure enjoyed!! write some more, Joe!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2011 3:18:00 PM

oh, I am SO HAPPY. I found one of yours I have not seen yet!!! I too dread the coming of winter and even more, those snowy slippery streets. Love it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2010 9:34:00 AM

Very clever take on the "devil" contest, Joe. The last line has great alliteration and humor as well. Nicely done! Thanks for your comments, Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/7/2010 1:06:00 PM

Nice write on the season with fine illiteration, Joe