Suspended

The air is clear & crisp its feel
While foliage full, the trees are still

A breath indrawn my senses tell!
I dread December as the devil dreads hell.

© Joe Maverick

naturelight verse

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Nathan D.

November 13, 2015 at 10:58 AM

read it

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2013 at 10:03 PM

Joe, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Take care, and enjoy the new week coming up. Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT **LINDA**

Daver Austin

April 11, 2013 at 12:30 PM

That breath a harbinger of the season to come. Like the style and the sensation. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2013 at 11:36 PM

returning yet again to this one , a personal favorite of mine that you have written as I dread the winter months as well, Only January I dread even more than January!! thanks so much for your comments today , Joe.

Michelle Mac Donald

May 14, 2012 at 2:24 PM

When "the trees are still", they too are probably thinking that they "dread December'', Joe.:( "suspended" is a fitting title for as much to you as, it might be for them. Still, the blasted snow is gone...for now! Love, Mikki :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2011 at 7:28 PM

returning to one that I have seen and methinks I have seen them all. anyway, this is one I sure enjoyed!! write some more, Joe!!

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2011 at 3:18 PM

oh, I am SO HAPPY. I found one of yours I have not seen yet!!! I too dread the coming of winter and even more, those snowy slippery streets. Love it!

Carolyn Devonshire

October 9, 2010 at 9:34 AM

Very clever take on the "devil" contest, Joe. The last line has great alliteration and humor as well. Nicely done! Thanks for your comments, Love, Carolyn