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Surviving Childhood

from beneath bangs that glistened a summer's sun were sky blue eyes lost in the depths of life i remember the seventies the most important thing within her mind was death little wrists turned up tracing her thoughts with blades that once cut paper but now sliced more her blood trickled down voicing her pain like the ink that now flows from her pen her scars remind her though she remembers all too well yet no one noticed at least not then

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2012 8:09:00 PM
I hope that ink,and only ink will stay flowing... Very nice!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/20/2012 8:23:00 PM
thank you....and yes, only ink will flow! childhood left me many hidden memories, often they come out through my muse!
Date: 11/18/2012 9:34:00 AM
No child should ever have to deal with these emotions. I am so sorry if this has been part of your Existance. I hope this is just a poetic expression.
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Date: 11/16/2012 8:58:00 AM
very profound Sandra, it was then and it is now, your words are deep, like the feeling that touches one that reads this ...
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Date: 11/15/2012 7:38:00 PM
You have captured the aftermath of a suicide attempt that few could understand unless they have felt that pain or been severely depressed. It's remarkable and beautiful. Your description and comments make perfect sense. Another interesting aspect of this poem is the therapeutic look back as an adult. This is worthy of considerable recognition--but I'm afraid all I can do is say thanks.
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Date: 11/12/2012 5:51:00 AM
Very nice my dear sweet poet friend.. deep piece the way I like them... hugs n more Michael
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Date: 11/12/2012 1:54:00 AM
Nice poem Sandra, good luck with the contest!! Hugs - Laila
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Date: 11/11/2012 4:52:00 PM
this is really good one on suicide survivors, if for that contest. I really like how you did this.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/11/2012 4:59:00 PM
yes it is for the contest, and thank you for your kind reply! :)

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