Survival Pleiades

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some time ago a hope; suffering place we live survival of our earth slowly dyeing outside seasons of anguish grief stand firm, change human voice so we may well survive 4/20/2021 Pleiades S Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman Go to top of page

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/25/2021 2:46:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Eve! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2021 4:22:00 PM

Eve, I enjoyed your poem here. And I thank you for my recent win in your delightful nursery rhyme contest. Is your day going ok? I was out almost all day and I am REALLY behind here. Oh my! Joe wants dinner. Hopefully I catch up tomorrow.

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/21/2021 7:50:00 PM

Dear Eve, your gifted pen spills a deep and meaningful poem. An emotive plea smoothly and elegantly expressed. Your last two line are especially poignant and impactful. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/21/2021 5:26:00 AM

I used to enter all these Pleiades contests but my heart is no longer functioning. You did very well here.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/20/2021 7:53:00 PM

This is a wonderful answer to this contest Eve

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/20/2021 6:32:00 PM

Nice S Pleiades, good luck in the contest