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Surrendering to the Cold Embrace of Death

The reaper comes to all. No heart has he, for he steals away not only the old and infirm, but also the young, icily gripping them in their trepidation when he’s in their sight though some he takes as they sleep through the night. If he should appear when you are conscious, you should not fight against him, for if your time to meet him is fated, your prayers will go unheard. Surrender to the cold embrace of Death. He shall carry you to the warmth of God’s light.

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Date: 4/21/2025 9:37:00 AM
" He shall carry you to the warmth of God’s light." love that
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot in Sara's contest, Andrea. You took away some of the sting of such a cold death by mentioning what is to come... at least for some.
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:50:00 AM
Dear Andrea, your imagery of Death is chilling yet comforting in the last four lines. Congratulations for your success in Sara's contest. So glad to share the podium with you, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/16/2025 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I enjoyed your etheree. I am a fan of the form. Yes unfortunately death comes for us all and there is no escape. You description of death coming for you is fearfully brillant yet I liked how you ended the poem with tranquility.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/16/2025 1:34:00 PM
thanks so much. I appreciate that.
Date: 4/16/2025 5:00:00 AM
Very nice etheree Andrea, congratulations
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Date: 4/14/2025 12:14:00 PM
dear sweet andrea, This made me think of some animated movie i watched on netflix, they show the reaper visiting kids too when they are sleeping, etc its like a cartoon! So cute! And the philosophical depth of your poem and understanding of death and reapers visits is truly soul hitting and moving! Made me feel so much as i fear the reaper, and i wish it wont visit you or me or any that i love soon! Pleasure reading this double etheree! Congratulations on your placement in saras contest! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/14/2025 10:47:00 AM
Nice Etheree. We must face the reality. Everyone has to go one daay.
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Date: 4/14/2025 3:09:00 AM
Dear Andrea, this poem is very beautifully written. Wow, the writing is so exquisite. Indeed, death is inevitable and it can take away anyone anytime. Best, Anne
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Date: 4/14/2025 1:09:00 AM
At my age, I suppose it is always round the corner. Thy will be done.
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Date: 4/13/2025 10:25:00 PM
A very inspiring poem. Death the inevitable reality of life has to be welcomed with geniality. But that needs grace and indefatigable faith in a world of bliss waiting everyone after death. Beautifully written Etheree, dear Andrea.,
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/13/2025 10:38:00 PM
Thanks, Valsa
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/13/2025 10:38:00 PM
You are wise
Date: 4/13/2025 1:28:00 PM
I don't fear him Andrea I just hope he doesn't visit me soon!! hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/13/2025 1:31:00 PM
yeah, me too!

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