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So Surreal

I wandered down memory's lane,..stopped from time to time..I saw as stranger sees..light ..dark sunlit scenes;voices,faces..places I've been..They talked..I listened..they seemed not to notice me..I am there ..yet..am not ...... inside, yet ... without a sense of togetherness canopies my heart

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:35:00 PM
A huge huge congratulations on your high placement. You deserve it.
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/29/2020 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Funom,I rarely enter contests these days unless the theme has a particular attraction.This poem I adapted to the haibun,as the poem itself has a very special rembrance to me.Cheers
Date: 6/28/2020 3:30:00 PM
indeed, life gets so surreal as we grow older . the haiku for this is outstanding.
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/28/2020 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Andrea,this is from a real life experience..to long to tell..other than in poetry..which I did at the time...but I am very happy Line honoured this particular creation for those reasons.Cheers
Date: 6/27/2020 6:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this insightful observation through your great poetic style. God bless you.
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/27/2020 7:27:00 AM
bless you Beata
Date: 6/26/2020 9:39:00 PM
A shadow at times in memories, do they see or do they know I've returned. Brian, congratulations on your win, my friend. Hugs Eve
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/27/2020 12:40:00 AM
THANKs Eve
Date: 6/26/2020 6:45:00 AM
Wonderful metaphors for your muse Brian! Congratulations on your win. This is really creative. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings
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Brian Strand
Date: 6/26/2020 7:17:00 AM
Cheers Aditi,you also,stay creative
Date: 11/24/2019 8:43:00 AM
Brian, this is beautifully penned. Haibun is one of my fav forms !
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/25/2019 10:52:00 AM
Yes Constance prose plus poem a literary like.

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