SURREAL

SURREAL On my way back to home at night. descent crescent Moon descended and as a torch showed strong light, glowing about ten feet above head. Neither dream nor an illusion ! On my way back to home at night, perplexed in bizarre condition, though consciousness acted all right. Sights dazzled ! forced to close eyes tight. Tree at gate slapped me with long leaf on my way back to home at night. Wished to enter home for relief. Surprised most being curious, Moon now shines spreading light too bright turning bigger ghostly gibbous on my way back to home at night.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 6:44:00 AM

Dear Anisha, This is such a captivating glimpse into a surreal moment on your journey home. The imagery of the descending crescent Moon and the glowing light creates an eerie yet enchanting atmosphere. Your words beautifully convey the sense of bewilderment and wonder experienced in this bizarre encounter. This is an evocative poem that leaves a lasting impression on me. Loved it! - Blessings, Daniel

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/29/2024 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Daniel Blessings