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Supreme Loneliness

Crowded city dying souls Central of earth Millions souls crafting their destiny Heart of cities of iron plastic Multitude traffic Lights Dead crowd smile Waving statues of emptiness Stranger within misery of night Priceless heartless so hollow Snatch within our game Silence through the middle of universe Reflection your supreme Loneliness … Playing game within yourself Void in universe Creators of game Was it your reason to play game………….. Behold children of loneliness Curtain whisper Creation starts to be alive … Listen to the water, bed, pictures They sing in the middle of the night A soft whisper I’m alive this is your last trip! Sit on train Ride this life journey with me Living in this life alive …… Your lips whisper in this Nudity Reveal your hidden secrets begging Sleep on my bed soft whispers Tears and smile welcome to our universe lounge Jul 8 09

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:16:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Isa and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:24:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 1:43:00 PM

Wonderful writing! Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Isa! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:04:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Elaine George

Date: 10/23/2009 10:28:00 AM

Dear Isa, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Isa. Love, Carol

Isa Mahrie

Date: 10/9/2009 10:43:00 AM

Thanks you carol and all of you guys for the warm welcome .... hope you enjoy the scrap :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 9:15:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Isa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 10/9/2009 7:40:00 AM

This is nice...enjoyed reading it. Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 6:52:00 AM

Sensing "silence through the middle of the universe" is truly a reflection of loneliness, Isa. But when you find someone to ride with you on the journey through life, the world seems to come alive again. Beautifully written, Isa! Love, Carolyn