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In the shade of the celestial covert, quite inviting, resonating a flow through the earth comfort. The vibrating strings deliver nature’s music surge, a sink, and rise medieval lyric fluidity of soft floating harp sound. Softest of feathers, lightly wound, outpouring motion of hovering rare coloured birds' flawless, untamed wings. To arouse the beast that lies in supplicant at his feet does not stray, sung asleep with lullabies. A spirit of fraternity, forged by time, love and care of creation for eternity. 10/7/2017

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Date: 7/6/2018 1:38:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your top win in Brian's contest, well done !
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:24:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win for this beautifully written poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/5/2018 9:05:00 AM
Your poem's topic certainly catch my eye and I am glad that I come across this one, this one sure is a beauty, many congratulations on your top win in the contest
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done.
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Eve. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 7/4/2018 3:00:00 PM
Eve, you've captured the essence of the picture.
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:52:00 PM
Congrats Eve, on your win in Brian's contest
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Date: 10/16/2017 1:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve.
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Date: 10/15/2017 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your nice win with this beautiful poem ...
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:29:00 AM
Back with that big hug Eve. Well done.
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Date: 10/13/2017 10:34:00 PM
Eve - congratulations on your well-written win, my friend - nicely done! :-)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:41:00 AM
Congrats Eve :)
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Date: 10/13/2017 5:34:00 AM
I liked your title and as Andrea mentioned, you were inspired by that painting, even though you told me you do not really like it... You wrote an amazing poem, with some wonderful soft and flowing lines.. A very beautiful poem.. and lovely ending.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:20:00 PM
wow, you were SO inspired by the picture. I wish something like this would come to me!! A sure winner!!
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:20:00 PM
I want to focus on his love of music but need to think of a form to use!
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Date: 10/8/2017 4:35:00 PM
Amazing depiction Eve. A winner for sure.
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Date: 10/8/2017 5:49:00 AM
What a wondrous write my friend! I loved the way you rhymed this one, very nicely done! The picture is perfect for this poem, you have delivered quite a significant piece, one full of mysteriousness and tranquility! What a delight this poem was to read this morning, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/8/2017 2:13:00 AM
I loved how you worked the tale of this painting with apt words, Eve. Spirit of fraternity between humans and beasts is a good theme for this piece. Love and hugs
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:42:00 PM
Thou art a Wordsmith Eve Roper, Shakespeare himself would have loved this. You captured the painting beautifully, Regards, Kevin x
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:42:00 PM
- An excellent poem, dear Eve - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 2:11:00 PM
I enjoyed reading the soft rhythm and flow of this poem--well written, Eve--best for a win!
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