Eric Cohen Poet Personification

Supernova Bossa Nova

Now I’m ninety solar masses and I grow as I accrete
all the inter-stellar gasses near my neighbors when we meet.
My doctor says I’ve grown too fat too fast, “… it’s unsustainable!”
But I’ve big plans for a big blast that I know is attainable:

I’ll do the Supernova Bossa Nova, watch me when I blow.
Let’s do the Supernova Bossa Nova and host a cosmic show
for galaxies both near and far, a dazzling dance display,
and I’ll blow a smoke ring where we are here in the Milky Way.

My hydrogen will all have fused and soon I will implode,
that's inward, I’m an introvert, but watch my shell explode.
My core will keep on shrinking ‘til a blackhole is created,
a wormhole linking to a world where dance is venerated.

We’ll do the Supernova Bossa Nova, watch me when I blow.
You can blame the Bossa Nova but let’s all enjoy the show!


July 4, 2020  
For the “You are a star Poetry Contest” sponsored by Nina Parmenter (First Place)

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Karen Dillon March 20, 2023 at 5:38 AM Congratulations Eric, love it, Karen Eric Cohen March 20, 2023 at 1:01 PM Thanks, Karen. Nice to hear from new people.

Brian Sambourne April 27, 2021 at 7:46 AM An excellent write! Very creative. I remember the Bossa Nova, the dance of love I believe. Congratulations, Eric. Best wishes, Brian Eric Cohen April 27, 2021 at 7:55 AM Many thanks, Brian. Best to you. ~Eric

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2020 at 2:45 PM how cute and unique!! big congrats on your win, Eric!! Eric Cohen July 11, 2020 at 3:09 PM Thank you, Andrea. Hope all is well. ~Eric

Richard Lamoureux July 10, 2020 at 3:06 PM I can see why this is a winner. Congrats Eric! Being an introvert I can relate. Eric Cohen July 10, 2020 at 5:06 PM Thanks, Richard. Nothing wrong with introversion. I'm not fat, though.

Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2020 at 10:27 AM Wow, Eric, this is so cool! You are a winner! Much deserved first place and a fave for me! Congratulations! Eric Cohen July 10, 2020 at 11:05 AM Thanks, Kim. I think we had a bit of fun with this contest.

Anisha Dutta July 10, 2020 at 7:45 AM EXCELLENT. Big congrats to win TOP. Eric Cohen July 10, 2020 at 11:14 AM Anisha, thank you for stopping by and the kind comment.

Paula Goldsmith July 9, 2020 at 11:01 AM Congratulations on your win. Cute and funny. Will you teach us some Bossa Nova dance steps to go with your poem???? Enjoy your win and day........... Eric Cohen July 9, 2020 at 11:49 AM Thank you, Paula. I'd love to teach you some steps, but I'm afraid the result might be some painful stepping on toes. By the way, I enjoyed your latest garden poem. Best to you.

Ann Gilmour July 9, 2020 at 8:34 AM Wow, Eric I love your poem ~ so much fun with more to come, as you do the 'Supernova Bossa Nova' I can't wait for you to blow... Such a well deserved top spot win my friend - a FAVE for me! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Eric Cohen July 9, 2020 at 10:59 AM Delighted to hear that, Ann. Thanks. From one star gazer to another, keep looking up. Best to you. Eric

Aditi Mishra July 9, 2020 at 1:08 AM This is beautifully adorned with pearls of science, magic and melody Eric. A delightful read that takes the reader on a dreamy journey. Congratulations on your top spot! :) Eric Cohen July 9, 2020 at 11:14 AM Many thanks, Aditi.

Jeanne Mcgee July 8, 2020 at 10:26 PM I'm working on some Bossa Nova Exploda dance steps...this was fun and congrats on that 1st place! Eric Cohen July 9, 2020 at 11:00 AM Now that sounds like fun. And good exercise. Thanks for the kind comment, Jeanne.

John Hamilton July 8, 2020 at 8:34 PM This is a fun one, I think the first time reading you Eric, I knew Nina would love this it's just her style, it's an all around great write, you must have a great imagination, congrats on being number 1. Eric Cohen July 8, 2020 at 9:13 PM Glad you enjoyed, John, and thanks for the nice comment. I'll stop by when I can. Eric

John Watt July 8, 2020 at 7:44 PM Absolutely loved this, Eric, and totally agree with Nina's choice for #1. You hit all the high notes with the scientific lexicon, the musicality, and the humorous tone throughout. My favorite is the third line. Big congrats for a big win, now go out and have a BLAST! ~ John Eric Cohen July 8, 2020 at 8:08 PM Thanks, John. As I mentioned to Nina there were several great entries. I had yours in mind in particular. What a creative take and execution. Best to you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 8, 2020 at 5:57 PM I saw it in the stars!!!! A fabulous win Eric. Hats off to you! ~xomo Eric Cohen July 8, 2020 at 8:10 PM Thanks again, Pigeon. Keep looking up.

Craig Cornish July 8, 2020 at 5:20 PM Bravo Eric! Eric Cohen July 8, 2020 at 8:11 PM Appreciate the kind words, Craig. Nice to hear from a top poet I've been a fan of here.

Regina Mcintosh July 8, 2020 at 4:02 PM Congrats to you :) Lovely write!!! God bless you :) Eric Cohen July 8, 2020 at 4:20 PM Thank you, Regina. Appreciate the kind words.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 4, 2020 at 6:16 AM Oh yeah! Fun, funny and smart, a winning most combination; I think Nina is going to love this! I thoroughly enjoyedit :))), My best to you in the contest! & "Supernova Bossa Nova" is the just FABULOUS. xomo Eric Cohen July 4, 2020 at 10:07 AM Thank you, Pigeon. So glad you like it. I loved your entry as well.