Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Charlie's Super... Contest  ~  March 29, 2025

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

Seedlings take new root when March winds blow
Cracks in sidewalks are where flowers grow
Extraordinary places, they bloom
Where one crushing foot could mean their doom

Doom comes to stems that once stood so tall
Bloom, now withered just like leaves in Fall
Grow with great strength, and bend in the wind
Blow good, it will. Do not be chagrined

Spring's wonderful season has arrived

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Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2025 at 7:32 AM Pretty and interesting! Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith May 22, 2025 at 11:04 AM Congratulations on your top win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Terry Miller May 22, 2025 at 8:19 AM Back with congratulations! Lin Lane May 22, 2025 at 8:33 AM Thank you with kind sincerity, Terry.

Charles Messina May 22, 2025 at 7:24 AM Such a lovely poem, Lin. Congratulations on your top win in this very difficult contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie Lin Lane May 22, 2025 at 8:11 AM Thanks a lot, Charlie. It was a fun challenge.

Duke Beaufort March 31, 2025 at 5:41 PM Lin, really clever indeed. I am amazed at the beautiful connections between the lines. Really good work! There's a lesson here! Lin Lane April 1, 2025 at 3:31 AM There definitely is, Duke. Charlie's requirements needed some thought to accomplish. I hope I have. Thanks!

Terry Miller March 30, 2025 at 8:24 AM Wow, this is a tough contest but you just wrote a beauty, GL Lin Lane April 1, 2025 at 3:30 AM Thanks very much for thinking so, Terry. We shall see.

Reya Suri March 29, 2025 at 7:52 PM love the progression in this poem! from the start to the end, I can feel the embrace of cherry blossoms. spring has indeed arrived with this masterpiece :3 Lin Lane April 1, 2025 at 3:29 AM Hello, Reya and thank you for your very insightful and complementary comments.

Tania Kitchin March 29, 2025 at 6:41 PM Lin, love the progression of the seedlings to flowering blooms, wonderfully penned. Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 6:57 PM Thanks so very much, Tania. ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2025 at 1:27 PM - Wonderful poem... I did my own twist on this word...:))) - Best wishes :) - Have a lovely weekend, Lin :) - hugs Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 1:42 PM How courageously like you, Anne-Lise. I'll go see what you've concocted. Thanks for weekend good wishes, and for you, as well. hugs

Joseph P. DiMino March 29, 2025 at 1:25 PM We see everything on earth repeat, comeback in one physical form or another...and yet we think ourselves simple vanish entirely, into some supernatural bliss.... Maybe more to learn, more to see? Lovely read, Lin; was enlightening. Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 1:40 PM Thanks for liking these lines, Joe. Kind of 'everything old is new again.'

Tom Cunningham March 29, 2025 at 9:22 AM You rose well to the challenge Lin, it's been a long time coming, had a mild frost this morning, winter doesn't want to let go. Tom Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 9:30 AM Still frosty... while it's been in the 70s and very pleasant here. Thanks for your thoughts on this one.

Connie Pachecho March 29, 2025 at 8:40 AM Lin, this is a really good poem.I like this. I can see a subliminal message here. Where a person that is endowed in poverty can seed and blossom under extreme conditions. Be good it will, and not be distressed with what others have. Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 9:29 AM Insightful, Connie. It could apply to someone in poverty, or someone who's suffered a setback and finds a way to get back up. Thank you.

Jan Allison March 29, 2025 at 6:34 AM brilliantly penned Lin, it is quite a challenge to weave in the words and have the required rhyme scheme but i have some ideas and will work on my poem this afternoon! hugs jan xx Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 7:28 AM It's definitely the 4 words that were a titch more of a challenge. I'm sure you'll create something perfect, perhaps not a poopy tail... I mean tale. Thanks, Jan.

Karen Jones March 29, 2025 at 6:30 AM A nice spring poem! Karen Jones March 29, 2025 at 4:30 PM I agree I’m drawing a blank and can’t even write a dumpster fire poem lol! Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2025 at 1:28 PM Can't handle any challenges on a Saturday night, Lin :) Lin Lane March 29, 2025 at 6:32 AM Morning, Karen. A bit of a challenge, this one. lol Thank you.