Super Nova Wish

I wish upon a great super nova Blinding my sensitive eyes Disappointing results Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2011 4:56:00 PM

wishes come true no matter what u wish upon Russell.. belief and faith play an important part and your lines reflect both positive and negative images luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2011 11:52:00 AM

Perhaps you should have chosen just one star, Russell. Enjoyed visualizing this creative write! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/26/2011 10:30:00 AM

This made me smile..it is truly creative. Nice use of Kimo.BG

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/26/2011 6:40:00 AM

This is just spectacular, Russell. Some of our best poetry comes during times like these....I dedicate my mustard seed poem to you, friend. No wishing allowed, only believing. (jk) I hope your day is suppppper bright! Gwendolen

Tony Lane

Date: 10/26/2011 5:47:00 AM

So it is with super novas. Tony

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2011 11:18:00 PM

Unusual one and enjoyable to see!