Super Chick

Our Banty rooster had no name.
We called him "Super Chick".
No predator could catch him,
He was just far too quick.
When he was newly from his shell,
Still in his mother's nest,
A sneak attacker killed his mom
And carried off the rest.
We didn't know this little one
Had managed to survive
Until we found him with the flock
Amazingly alive.
We watched for him each time we fed
And he was alway there,
Holding his own against the odds
Without a mother's care.
He grew into a handsome fowl,
More beautful than most
With iridescent feathers that
Would make a peacock boast.
The other roosters were picked off
All singly, one by one,
Until we decided raising
Banty chickens wasn't fun.
Super Chick was left to guard
His little Banty harem.
A neighbor's dog thought it would be
Hilarious to scare them.
Super knew that it was he
Who must take the big dog's dare.
He flew at the cur who fought back
And left him lying there.

Our little Banty is no more.
We took his loss so hard
That never again will we have
Pretty Bantys in our yard.


Written for Dane Ann's Contest  Won 9th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 29, 2010 at 8:47 AM
This is a story one can tell. I felt like that once over a dog . I loved him to death when he died . I swore to never get close to a dog again..P.d.
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 8:02 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your placement in this competition. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Aw that poor brave thing. I enjoyed this story, JOyce, and congratulations for making the winner circle. Luv,andrea
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March 20, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Great write, Joyce. You brought the Banty rooster to life in style. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
Belt Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Congrats....Good Job....Larry
White Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:33 AM
That was one strong willed chicken Congrats Joyce
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March 20, 2010 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your success in my contest. I cried the first time I read this one. Chickens make great pets...if only people knew how fun they really are. Thank you for entering. Smiles, Dane Ann
Guzzi Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 4:58 PM
awwwwwwww amazing what animals give & teach! Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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March 3, 2010 at 9:13 AM
i enjoyed this very much. thanks for sharing it shawn
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March 3, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Joyce. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love,Carol
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March 2, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Cute story with a sad ending. Very well written, Joyce. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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March 2, 2010 at 7:13 PM
A unique write Joyce.. if for any one of the contests.. much good luck to u.. your words are engrossing to read.. a special story indeed..enjoyed ..thankxxx for your ever welcome comments on my poetry and blogs.. appreciate..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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