Super-Hot Sunday (Spaces)

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                He's trying out that new-fangled deep fryer for Super Bowl 


                The third firetruck arrives at Half-time




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For Brian's "Spaces" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/17/2010 5:20:00 PM
funny, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 2/17/2010 11:57:00 AM
oh, I am having fun with this winner, Carrie! this kinda fun is what makes the soup so cool! and you too! thanks and CONGRATS! jimbo
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:58:00 AM
LOL! LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!Congratulations Carrie, on your Honorable Mention in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand. This is a hoot! I can see why you are in the winners circle! Smiles, Dane Ann LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!LOL!
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:57:00 PM
SOMETHING A TIPCAL GUY WILL DO....WITH MEN NEVER EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED....I.T.
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:22:00 AM
This is so sad yet funny because it reminded me of the time my cousin tried to fry a turkey in his backyard. Fire - oh hes. Good poem.
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Date: 2/14/2010 8:43:00 AM
also, one of my favs. Dang, some of my favs did not get on the top, but there were WAY too many entries to give first places to the many deserving ones!!
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Spaces...I love this write, it is so humorous! I wish continued success and may God bless you. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 2/13/2010 4:40:00 AM
Carrie, I loved this one! It really made me laugh, being the kind of cook I am, that dinner is ready when the fire alarm rings. So glad it was a winner. Connie
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:40:00 PM
Hey Carrie, you are blazing these contests with your great poetry! My congratulations on your win in Brian's Spaces" Contest! Great job! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:21:00 PM
Excellent Carrie, made me chuckle big time, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:44:00 AM
Carrie, you are just too funny. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I am still laughing.
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:36:00 AM
Of course this would be a winner. I love it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/11/2010 8:36:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem in the Spaces contest.. an amazing write for an amazing win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:59:00 AM
this is so funny,Carrie. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:51:00 AM
LOL LOL I Love It!!!!!! Congratulations on your win Carrie!!! So cute!! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:37:00 AM
I love this one, Carrie! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:21:00 AM
Hilarious!! - Congratulations on you win - Tim
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Date: 2/11/2010 1:29:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Date: 2/11/2010 12:40:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:57:00 PM
a very daring piece and of course so funny,,hope the third fire truck was successful,,I would hat to see the loss of grill food and a good grill,,,and good luck in the contest,,,and Thank you for all your visits and for all the wonderful comments you leave behind,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:18:00 AM
lLWow!! I hope he was using it outdoors. Great one Carrie. Thank you for your comments on my latest posting. You are always so good to read us. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:35:00 AM
Ha! Nicely done. And timely and topical! Well, Miss Lennon, you beat me , but I'm glad. You are always so nice and you are a true talent. I was honored to win second! I would like to see more contests like that. They are a challenge and they bring out the wsit in everyone! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:22:00 PM
Carrie my neighbor, I had to stop in and say hello. You certainly cracked me up with this one. I needed a good laugh! I reckon I should move my deep fryer a little distance from the garage to fry up my shrimp today. You have a wonderful day and know I forever hold you in my prayers, YF4L, mj
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Date: 2/6/2010 5:27:00 PM
I'm not going to FLA. dear HE is...retiring there...oh well maybe I'll go for a visit in the spring? PS so far on the image I give you #1 no kidding! HUGS
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